I got bored, and after a previous post i made decided to expand. Im adding my own twist and flair to star wars. What u thimk? Its a work in prpgress so... Simple farm boy, wants to join the army but Uncle is a douche. After they buy 2 servants, boy meets a sorcerer after one servant trys to find his old master. The boys aunt and uncle are murdered so the boy joins the sorcerer's quest. They meet a gunslinger, whos best freind is a werewolf, at a bar. They hire him to go to take them to the princess' home world. He's got the fastest giant bird in the sector, which is a millennium old Falcon. they fly on the falcon, but as they head to the planet, they see a moon, and the Falcon gets pulled in by some unseen magic. Tgey quickly learn that the princess must be held prisoner on a moon. And the moon is controlled by the tyrant ruler of the galaxy. AND(!!!!!) The moons actually a giant castle-esque fortress! So m the boy and the gunslinger disguise themselves as soldiers of the storms, so as to go undetected. They take the werewolf with them as a "prisoner". Whilst the sorcerer goes to disrupt the magic that keeps the falcon bound and chained. Little do they know, the sorcerers former apprentice is on the moon-castle. Hes heavily armored in black, somewhat steam-punk like samurai armor. He has been taught in the forbidden arts of magic, and sensez the sorcerer...deciding to kill his former master he sets out to find him. When the princess is found, the two heros trip an alarm and all Hades breaks loose. The soldiers of the storms converge on our hero's location, bullets and bolts of magic flying everywhere in the confined prisoners corridor. Eventually the princess sees a garbage chute and yells "its our only way out! Jump in!" The boy jumps in after her and as the werewolf gets near he grunts his disapproval. The gunslingers able to understand him somehow and yells "I dont care what you smell, just get in there!" They plop into a huge garbage pile, and the one door is locked. "Ive got an idea," the gunslinger says as he aims his revolver at the door. "NO!" The boy yells, and the bulket ricochets around for a few seconds. "...oops. my bad." The princess asks "now what?" "You tell me, this was all ur plan, Your Highness" replys the gunslinger. Before the princess can reply, a small creature - Baby Cthulu by the look of it - comes out of under tje water. The werewolf roars at it, and the creature retreats. Then a grinding noise fills the room, and the walls start to close in! Our heros begin to brace the wall with junk, as thr boy takes out a little walkie-talkie and calls his serv-bots. Luckily ones got mad hacking skills and is able to turn the trash compactor power off and open the door. Meanwhile, the sorcerer sneaks around the moon-castle and finds the source of thw magic that traps the Falcon. He removes the magic stones that conduct the energy, and leaves to find his companions. Yet all the while he senses his former apprentice approaching... As our heros are escorting the princess to the Falcon, thwy run into some soldiers of the storms. The werewolf goes to town on them, and they go on their way. As they reach the Falcon, an intense shootout/brawl ensues between the group and more soldiers. The sorcerer senses his freinds are in danger, and begins to run. But then his way his blocked by his apprentice. "Well well, we meet again Darth ".... Tjis is where i stopped for tje day and cause i need names for the main chatacters. Thoughts? Suggestions? Opinions?