Lyrics i made, let me know what you think!

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Pocketthunder, Oct 22, 2010.

  1. i was feelin it and i made the following lyrics in like 5 minutes im just wondering if its any good so tell me what you think maybe rate it out of 10? honest opinions please but disrespect isnt necessary im just bored

    I got my very own zeitgiest perogative
    matter of fact its so good its un audative
    im spillin coldest shit that's ever bin on the planet
    when my verse landed
    it handed the cannon
    to relax haters of passion
    guess whos track
    got unrapped
    out of wack
    has unlatched
    amazingly debating
    on your unfunctionaly
    attemps to be like me
    I see but you cant see
    attempts may be made but
    eventually youl be
    somewhat closer to bein me
    but not quite
    but that's alright
    one of me in the world will suffice

    ive created a sponsor
    for marijuansta
    cuz nobody else wants ta
    stand up for the prosperious
    tetra hydro cannibol
    on a wall for yall
    to see me spillin freely
    innapropriatelty
    toppin the tallest
    over ballers
    over halla famers

    Im most famous
    More delictible then famous amous
    my aim is, smoke weed
    my name is, un accesibly
    unavaliable at the moment
    cuz when I pick up the phone
    you hear the words please hold it


    We be the illest
    bringing chillest
    chronic straight to the bowl
    smoke it now your still in control

    So please hold
    As I wipe my ass on the goverments shit whole

    Ima keep stunnin
    ima keep comin
    home for my lovin
    im strange
    strangest
    of the bangest
    of the middle eastern pirate pigeons
    im fearless, like obama
    supposed to bring change but where the fucks the marijuana


    L to the C in the middles where you see the big C
    either that or on the screen of the flatscreen
    magazine, or through the window of a limosine.
     
  2. i enjoied it.
     

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