lots of poetry...

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by adamBC, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. well theres been some good poetry posted on here, i used be alright, but i seem to have lost my touch, ill try to work something up here, but ill bet you ill hit back instead of a post (ive written hundreds of poems in my life, and have not one saved in writing or digitally or anything)


    at night when im alone
    lights dark, streets quiet
    i like to think of what ive seen

    ideas blazing like a fire
    from my inside, they come out
    about what there could have been

    an experience shared
    love found, love lost
    would run but need to stay

    when i close my eyes
    i wonder, i wish
    for the one that got away








    .....???
     
  2. nice dude




    what ideas ya got : ) ?
     
  3. wow. that was really good. the last line gives a really nice impact. keep up the good work man
     

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