I like it although I feel like an exposed butthole witha dildo(star wars light sabre-style?) pointed at it might work well within this framework.
It's not "polished" enough. Could use some font and style tweaking. Try playing around with it some more and see if you can make it look even better. Just giving some "advanced critique"
you suggesting like a harder style? Currently almost reminds me of Sega styling on some of their Dreamcast stuff.
No. Not a harder style. I think it's too puffy and the letters are too slim for that kind of stroke. And the background letters could be tweaked a bit too. I'm just suggesting that the OP might polish it a bit more. It looks kinda unfinished to me. You know, bunch of good ideas, but they're not really fully done ?
