I wrote this poem a few nights ago, and I would appreciate any feedback. Basically it is about the old days when I used to smoke with my best buddy. Let Me Live My Life Take your finger, Now plug the hole, Don't let smoke linger, Just let it roll It's a pretty sight, Watching it float, Now to my delight, It's inside my throat The sensation is endless, I'm smoking in style, And living in bliss, Hope it lasts for a while Driving with friends, And some Dre Dog songs, This day cannot end, Please last all day long A beautiful evening, I'm thinking a lot, My thoughts depening, It's decided: I love pot This simple rhyme, Cannot explain, How such great times, Can end in pain I was finally done, All good things die, No more harmless fun, I just can't see why This is not a drug, Just a simple herb, Now I'm in a hole I dug, People are just disturbed Let me live my life.