"Legalise it!" song I did

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by bhaktagabriel, Jun 9, 2011.

  1. Hey everyone listen to the song I made!
    It's called Legalise it! The lyrics are originally by Peter Tosh,
    I just changed it up a bit.
    The music is electronic in nature.

    Here are the lyrics:

    legalise it
    don't criticise it
    legalise it
    and I will advertise it
    some call it tampi
    some call it the weed
    some call it marijuana
    some ah dem ah call it ganja
    you got to legalise it
    and don't criticise it
    legalise it
    and I will advertise it
    singers smoke it
    and players of instruments too
    legalise it
    that's the best thing you can do
    doctors smoke it
    nurses smoke it
    judges smoke it
    even the lawyer too
    legalise it
    and don't criticise it
    good for the flu
    good for asthma
    good for tubercolocis
    good for curing psychosis
    got to legalise it
    shouldn't criticise it
    legalise it
    and i will advertise it
    birds eat it
    ants love it
    people eat it
    george washington say to plant it
    keep on telling you legalise it

    Here are the two tracks (streaming):
    YouTube - ‪Legalise it! [cover-song] original by Peter Tosh‬‏

    YouTube - ‪Legalise it! [cover-song] original by Peter Tosh rock music‬‏

    the 1st is more of a slow,relaxing beat
    the 2nd version is more upbeat

    Tell me what you think of it.
     
  2. I sat here, wondering how I can attempt to judge it without being overly negative. I couldn't come up with a solution. Sorry, brother, but this is absolutely horrible.
     
  3. sorry, i understand you put effort into this ...

    but i laughed for a good half an hour ... :|
     
  4. #5 nnunes, Jun 13, 2011
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    This is why people think the propaganda a bout weed is true
     
  5. lmao funny shit
     
  6. Noones said it so far. But its pretty bad.

    1/10.
     
  7. ehhh.. not so hot
     
  8. Well to be fair hes on the Trinidad Islands. So maybe he no speaky so well.
     
  9. Eh, I like Sublimes versions over tosh's :/ chill ass song
     
  10. lol, I've been ripping my bong for the last 1 hour and that tune is fucking spacey.
     
  11. MY bad dude, I thought you were saying you wrote the song.

    Still man, nice try.
     
  12. That really doesn't mean much at all. First off, language has nothing to do with music or singing abilities...he doesn't have any. Second of all, I know people who speak limited English, but can sing an English song that they know very well.
     
  13. That was pretty bad, find a vocal coach and a good producer, or stick to sampling beats. The music industry is exactly like any other business. Talent is only part of the equation, if you work hard enough and learn the trade you will be able to attain some measure of success. Our opinions may seem harsh but in the music business every critical opinion is a clue on how to improve. Use our comments as building blocks.
     
  14. Laugh. Out. Loud.

    But don't let me interfere with your dreams bro.
     
  15. Bro... this is terrible :laughing:
     

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