Into the Night, A poem

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by DY Cannabis, Oct 11, 2009.

  1. I'm pretty blazed and I felt inspire to write this. What do ya think?

    Into the night

    Why did you leave me
    A broken shell of a man
    Who once had everything
    But it was crushed in the palm of his hand
    He tells the world he's ok, he's fine
    But his insides are hollow
    An empty bottle of wine

    Embers fall from his cigarette
    Ashes to ashes
    Memories burned away in time

    He tries his hardest to be what the world tells him
    Studies hard
    Does his best
    Dreams of a life of success
    Where he can show that he is the man they knew he'd be
    Take care of a proud family

    The stress of life from day to day
    Smokes a bowl to keep the mediocrity away
    Take in the highlights
    The laughs, the music, the feel
    But nothing can take away the pain that is real

    He looks up at the moon
    Half circled in light
    Empty or Full?
    He questions into the night​

     
  2. Bump for the night folks
     
  3. dude fucking aweomse poem man. keep writing bro. +rep for that man. peace and love
     
  4. fucking amazing bro.
     
  5. honestly man that was beatiful. do you mind if i use part of it in a song im writing?
     
  6. great poem man.
     
  7. Thanks for the feedback guys. I honestly didn't think it was that good, but I guess it is!
     
  8. yeah man it's great. Can I use a few lines with your permission? you will get credit and ill send you a copy of the recording when my band and i get in the studio.
     

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