Inhale..Release..Repeat

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by RoadhouseBlues, Dec 4, 2008.

  1. Just a little something i came up with awhile back..Lemme know what ya think!


    Inhale..Release..Repeat
    Let the smoke fill your head
    Cloud the mind
    Inhale
    Your thoughts slow
    Release
    Body is numb
    Pain is forgotten
    Repeat
    No more anger
    Inhale
    And your worries cease
    Release
    Tomorrow may never come
    Repeat
    Repeat
    Repeat
     
  2. i love the repetition.
    actually i love the whole damn thing.
    a lot.
    very very good:hello:
     
  3. Hey thanks..i actually JUST got done reading your poem then i decided to post mine...yours was pretty cool to ;)
     
  4. what a weird coincidence! lol. and thanks!
     
  5. niceeee ! !
     

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