"Indigenous" original poetry from me.

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Tuk2, Feb 19, 2010.

  1. "Indigenous"

    Eternal rain constant pain, thinking its the norm
    feel whats real and never heals, all you do is mourn
    shoes that dance same shirt same pants, ones youve always worn
    abandon trust persue pure lust, take back all youve sworn
    odds and ends to make ammends, pieces tattered and torn
    once you fail might lift the vail, ego you adorn
    in the end you make ammends, nothing more to scorn
    knowing its all temporary, life will be reborn.
     
  2. thanks dmoe.

    sorry to bump, criticism isnt always a negative thing.:p
     

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