Imprisoned in Freedom

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by pieking, May 23, 2011.

  1. I stand before you with a profound dream.

    For this dream I require a team.
    A team that screams the way I scream,
    That schemes the way I scheme,
    With a burning passion that turns water to steam.

    We shall flaunt the taunt of a true Débutante with the want to haunt a world that lacks a savant to write a page in history with a new kind of font that will daunt those who don't join our jaunt at the beginning of this epic conte.

    For this dream I require a vessel.
    A vessel that sails where I want it to sail,
    That hails from where we also hail,
    With our determination that forces prevail.

    A ship for this trip that will cause our world to flip, rip, and skip to a place where we must equip the whip with an ever so sharp tip to thwart the quip that would cause us to lose our grip and then slip trying not to tip the cup that will drip the final sip of this dream, sending it into an eternal kip.

    For this dream I require an Island.
    An Island with land that I will to land,
    With stands for which we also stand,
    With the potential of the very dream at hand.

    A mound of ground of which I am bound to have found before this dream is downed and then inevitably drowned without a sound from the hound that was innappropriately crowned upon the ideals of the world renowned so greatly abound with every scrap of ignorance around to surround those, like us, who refuse to be unwound.

    For this dream I require Freedom.
    Freedom from herds that I did not herd,
    From words that I did not word,
    With sincerity that has never been slurred.

    An ideal so real with energy we can feel of an appeal so surreal it can reveal the true to conceal and potientally heal the false who steal from this ordeal the purity of its repeal of the evil that seems so unreal to those who cannot deal with having the Achilles heel of people like us who refuse to kneel.

    With this dream so profound, I'll attempt to astound those who struggle to cope and are looking for hope.

    -JPIII 4/28/11
     
  2. Nice...
    Dude... you should send this to Ice Cube and the Lench Mob label. I could see this getting thrown down with some glocks, cocks and solid gold dancers..

    :bongin: :bongin:
     

  3. haha thanks man!

    glad to see people liking my work.
     
  4. resurrected for a blade to check out!
     
  5. Oh, hey. more of you.
    good stuff!
     
  6. oh, hey. you too!

    haha thanks again man. I have actually another posted around here, if you're interested I can resurrect that one as well. if not, I understand, my poems are lengthy and often tedious if read one right after another lol
     
  7. say no more, link?
     
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