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Im trying to write songs.....

Discussion in 'General' started by BenLeve, Feb 6, 2014.

  1. i love writing songs and riffs
    i recorded all of this from scratch (drum machine and i play guitar)

    http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Fpq5lh7vYt
    what do you think? is it bad or good? im aiming for pop/psychedelic rock

    but would you even consider it listenable?

    im scared it only sounds good to me and horrible to every one else
     
  2. It's a chill riff.. are those 8th notes or 16th notes you are playing though? The speed wasn't totally constant but it was a cool riff
     
  3.  
    yeah i noticed the speed issues
     
    Im playing on the 8th fret for most of it
     
    thanks
     
    any constructive criticism? like what would you class the genre as?
     
  4. It is tough to say without lyrics - bands in different genres have songs both lively and solemn 
     
    Define it however you see it through your eyes
     
  5. it's chill but kinda basic. keep practicing and don't worry about recording and other peoples opinions.
     
    play for the love and all is right
     
  6. any other opinions dude? :)
     
  7. not bad man. try using a metronome next time when you record. a little more space between the notes in the riff and it would sound great.
     
    toke up and let your creativity flow bro, dont worry about what other people think, just write what you feel, you'll be amazed by what you can do.
     
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