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I wrote this after I my dad had a stroke

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by PatrickTheToker, May 13, 2009.

  1. and now i sit and contemplate
    as thought if i have no fate
    i sit and fear what might be near
    the thought of regret being here
    strong as though it seems
    one mention of death and my mind screams
    like brittle glass, life it can break
    when that moment comes along,
    when you just know something is wrong
    as time begins to slow,
    and everything seems wilt instead of grow
    my mind starts to race, and
    the voices of others begin to dissipate
    before you know it time stands still
    all that remains is thoughts of if ever and will
    in my heart i know everything will be well
    but my mind isn't such a simple sell

    My dad recently suffered a pretty bad stroke. He is in the ICU right now, I wrote this as the best way to try and describe what I am feeling. I don't really know if it makes sense to anyone but me though.
     
  2. I enjoyed it- I hope everything works out for you man
     
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