I haven't named this yet..

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by suit up lets go, May 1, 2003.

  1. #1 suit up lets go, May 1, 2003
    Embarrassing words lead to embarrassing gestures.
    Me, you, and a bottle of emotions.
    We both know that by tomorrow it'll be
    Me and a bottle of wasted dreams.
    A silent debacle with myself concludes that you're just a
    hussy, a
    fake, a
    pretender.
    Changing faces to prove to humanity that you're an asset
    But you're just a masked fool.
     
  2. #2 smokin&tokin, May 3, 2003
    thats deep! i like that alot! good job! post some more!
     
  3. #3 IGotTheCottons, May 3, 2003
    i'll second smokin&tokin on this one... that's good stuff. i can't wait to read more.
     
  4. #4 Girlz2Disrupted, May 15, 2003
    "A silent debacle with myself concludes that you're just a
    hussy, a
    fake, a
    pretender"

    this is an amazing line...liked it alot..
    of course in my version that would read..."you're just a pussy, a liar, and afraid..."

    hehe but that's this girlz point of view...good writing
     

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