its a 6,4,1,5 in the key of A for you musicians. This girl just dicked me over so i wrote this song. LEt me know what you think? After all the time we spent you just want to be alone I just cant take your crap You said you'd call me on the phone So I'll continue just waiting here just trying to fight my fear that you might have found someone new this will always bug me till i run back into you I cant help but to think back Wondering what went wrong i really thought we could of had something that lasted long We all say, we will never change, but with each word spoken, the person is never the same. I wish I could turn back the hands of time, When you believed in the dreams of mine, The types of talks, The relationship that never got off, I wanna move on, Except there's this feeling of not knowing what went wrong, Im tired of being your friend, when will this end? Why cant you see, that you were the girl for me, but Went with him, and you Let me go, now your hearts a broken, the pain...it bleeds through and shows. I wish I could turn back the hands of time, When you believed in the dreams of mine, The types of talks, The relationship that never got off, I wanna move on, Except theres this feeling of not knowing what went wrong, Exposing open wounds, that were cut so deep, crying every second, even when you sleep but in the end i knew you wernt in to me.
thats a song?! or a fruity poem...? it sucks sorry. just go smoke a a couple bowls to yourself and u will be fine
I say you have good song writing skills. I could imagine it as the sort of song some new pop punk band would play, or even as some soft rock. But then again I dont understand how to read music, so dont know its actual genre. Nice work.
yeah i know i am a little emo bitch (the funny thing is i listen to jazz all the time) so i dont know thanks guys for your nice words ecept for GWS he can rot in hell (jk) not spreading bad carma like mrfunkdadilly. peace out. -lex