My english teacher liked to chop up my poems. Punctuate add or subtract,or just a comment LIFES SPRING Fox grass Glistens Squirrel stops, listens Crystalline gaze Lighting, moon rays Ancient rains Flow through our veins Earths beauty cries Tears in my eyes Trees bending Winds unending Dispersing sunset We're part of it Embrace mother earth Embody her worth Know that there's more Mysteries in store Wisdoms call Known by all