I just wrote this paper in english lol....i think its good Our world today, there is a lot of human rights issues, some are simple and clear cut offenses such as arbitrary imprisonment, torture, and outright discrimination, and even child labor laws. Arbitrary imprisonment-when an individual is arrested and detained, with out the likelihood that you had committed a crime. Torture- the United States of America tortures detainees by water boarding them, while in the same case other countries torture their detainees. Discrimination- hatred upon someone because of their looks, religion, nationality, skin color...ect. Child Labor- having an individual under your set labor law age. I don't believe the United Nations nor any organizations if there are any, are doing any thing about it. So ya there's laws against having under the age 14 work in the United States, but in another country the law may say the age of 8. I don't think we can force other country's to follow every thing we do its uncanny and outrageous. And I can't say the America is doing something about either because we have Guantanamo bay, and torture prisoners there. I think the world its self needs to just put down their guard, and respect other people and their own rights. I think away to do this would to have a meeting of all the nations head leaders and just mingle, and speak of what their laws are and how are they working out for your country. And if we couldn't come up with something sutal like co-mixing their laws so everyone has the same law in the world. Or have every one that believes in one thing stays where it originated from and just respect other people. World Peace
I haven't had an assignment to write a paper under 7 pages in three years. Besides a good amount of grammar and spelling errors it's an okay essay I guess. But since it's for your English class I'm guessing you won't be happy when the page is filled with red ink (if your teacher hands assignments back)
im not gonna bitch about the grammar, but your argument itself has so many holes i dunno where to start...
lol alright then fix it and post it and i wanna see whats different i just want to see what your idea of it is
yeah thanks for pointing out the obvious but I turn 18 months ago thank you, but no it's not a high school paper its 1 that we get a do for fun in ( college freshman thank you )
What grade are you in?! World Peace In our world today, there are a lot of human rights issues, some are simple and clear cut offenses such as arbitrary imprisonment, torture, [andX] outright discrimination, and even child labor laws. Arbitrary imprisonment; when an individual is arrested and detained, with out the evidence, that proves he had committed a crime. Torture - the United States of America tortures detainees by water boarding them, while in the same case other countries torture their detainees. Discrimination - hatred against someone based on their looks, religion, nationality, skin color...etc. Child Labor - Forcing children to work is a clear violation of child labor laws. I don't believe the United Nations or any other organizations, if there are any, are doing any thing about it. [So yaX] There are laws against having individuals below the age of 14 work in the United States. However, in other countries the age limit may differ. I don't think we can force other countries to follow every thing we do, it would be uncanny and outrageous. And I can't say the U.S. is in a position to enforce their laws on other nations because we operate Guantanamo bay and torture prisoners there. I think [the world its self needs to just put down their guardX] all countries must respect their people and the human rights. I think the way to do this would be [to have a meeting of all the nations head leaders and just mingle, and speak of what their laws are and how are they working out for your countryX] for the UN to hold a world meeting of world leaders to discuss how the human right laws are being applied in each country. [And if they couldn't come up with something [sutal?] like co-mixing their laws so everyone has the same law in the world. Or have every one that believes in one thing stays where it originated from and just respect other peopleX]. C+
I thought it was spectacular, absolutely riveting! I actually read the whole thing start to finish in one sitting, it was that good. I especially admire your command of the English language and use of obscure but powerful terminology like "sutal" (I couldn't even find that one in the dictionary - very impressive my friend). I wish I could write like that. Keep up the good work man, surely you'll become a published author or Pulitzer Prize winner someday.
If you are telling the truth, and you honestly are a college freshman, then you and/or the education system failed. For a college freshman, I revise my grade for your paper and the quoted post above to