ha yea..main summery is that at one point i thought i was in a fuckin dream and something needed to be said for me to get out of the dream but my homie wouldnt fuckin answer any question i asked so i kept askin shit n still no response untill the point i wanted to fuckin cut myself a lil just to know i was still awake.. i didnt thank god but when your homie causes thoughts like that to run thru ur fuckin mind...fuck that bastard...
Word. Use proper grammer, and at least make an attempt to let the audience understand the story. Because i am completly sober and i have no idea what you said. It just seems like you freaked out with some of the wrong people to trip with. Edit: and if i think im dreamin, or actin weird i just pinch myself. Better then cutting your wrist with a steak knife.
No offense but that seemed like something a 14yr old would type i have no idea what you were saying besides homie and something about a dream and someone acting like they were sleeping.