Lets see what yall got. I know there are other threads but we need a fresh one. Drop some lyrics ! Drunk as a skunk Smoking on that funk Burning Kools like a fool We cool, you already knew We know you ain't thats old news Getting hoes like we a pimp tool Never went to school Cause we ain't soft like wool Stunting all day and night Drinking that liqour staying right Got the 38. special ready to fight Then say goodnight Back off or you'll lose your life Cut your ass up with a knife Then hang you from a telephone wire Bitch we on fire Haters gay sitting in the choir Fighters on the streets keeping their rep up Always stepping up Never letting up Somebody getting set up Bout to slip and get picked up Shoulda ducked he just got fucked up something i thought of how is it?
let me give you some advice. as a person that raps a lot, hangs around people rapping all day, and has spent lots of time in the recording studio i can tell you that you really need to incorporate double-syllable, triple-syllable, and quadruple-syllable rhymes to your shit, to make it more interesting and to make your flow better. right now your just doing basic single-syllable rhyming sceme that (no offense) just sounds very elemetry. Example of Double-Syllable rhyming courtesy of Big L in the song "All Black": Yo once again it's the Big L, that kid who got much props from killin corrupt cops, with motherfuckin buck shots Example of Triple Syllable courtesy of Eminem in the song "Drug Ballad": Back when Mark Walhberg was Marky Mark This is how we used to make the party start We used to, mix Hen' with Bacardi Dark And when it, kicks in you can hardly talk Example of a quadruple syllable rhyme courtesy of Eminem in the song "Bad Meets Evil": I don't speak, I float in the air wrapped in a sheet I'm not a real person, I'm a ghost trapped in a beat
i spit out internet rhymes, just trying to get my internet shine and if i don't spark your interest, fine, but your female friends should get into it (Why?) i am back like, i returned from my past life everything looks gray but its not just black white i am the mack type, thats why i rap tight i thought i trapped white but it turns out she's only half white i got the white girl...but she's only half white remember when i sold you blow, it was only half white... ill take any asian, latina. black type...but only if she is half white...(haha) remember that black girl from half baked, it turns out she is half white (wow) halle berry, she is half white as for beyonce , she looks half white....michael jackson wishes he was half-white (lol) this whole world seems to be half white mixed with a whole bunch of other stuff... my half white girl left me....oh well, on to another slut and if she doesn't know whats up...she gets an upper cut i only go for girls who got the exotic type in her and for some reason...i can still go for a hot girl with some white in her.....killa!!!! chyea!!! ay!!!