lol because its so hard to rhyme and add personification and similies into the scheme of things... Oh dear god, how does anyone ever write a rap song. Watch: I flip lines and divide like multiplication twisted and rewind Yes I spit rhymes in a rythm so devine itll blow minds Hold spines the way I like to fuck from behind Oh my, like I made a mistake, trip without falling, levitate Yes Im a heavy weight but feelin kinda skinny I spit out lines like im the rhyme devinci You dont wanna fuck with me when Im feelin tipsy Cause like a fallin draddle every jew loves to spin me.
it was decent but please no more weed rappers. wiz khalifa beat u to the punchline i think you need some better rhyme schemes or punch lines. i forget the word for it but yeah,better bigger words.
Sir and/or very manly woman, I do not fancy myself a rapper. I have no rap skills whatsoever, so I concede to the fact that you're a better rapper than I'll ever be. However, since you asked...the instrumentals were too damn loud; it was hard to hear what you were saying about 75% of the time; your similes and metaphors were basic. and your vocabulary was even more basic than that... It was just like listening to a slightly talented 5th grader talk about themselves. Sorry dude...just being honest.