This is a thread for beginners to rap and freestyling to learn some tips and read some freestyles. And for "expirienced" or for people who know a little something about freestyling to come and give tips and shit. But whether your new or old good or bad post your best freestyles on here an see what people think. Heres a rap i just made up. Your a fake thug to-you i show no love Your notin to me 1,2,3 your just another number in ma killen spree If u talk shit then you just prvokin the beast inside me Soon ill explode like nalpam Rainnin down on the crazied iraqi and vietnam You better pray for god But even he dont know what im about to unleash on your soul My rhyms will tear you to shreds Ill spit on you and piss in ya death bed One silver bullet straight throught your incompitant ignorant head Act like a tough guy now But when its time to put in work your now where to be found I push mmortal technique around I am under the under ground That took me a couple mins to think up most of it and prob like 20-25 mins to revise and stuff (i no thts not a freestyle but w.e. Haha)
I didn't quite understand your freestyled rhyme So you might want to revise it if you have the time But now I digress to deliver a message Heed my call to head to the Music Hall Lots of freestyle threads there so have a ball http://forum.grasscity.com/music-hall/
Coming in to make a change call me Obama Lyrically I drop bombs kinda like Osama After hearing the the track like Twix, you need a moment To process what I said, now who's the next opponent Rhyming bullets spewing out like I were a BR Critical condition, just like its the ER My eyes read and low but I still see well Chokin' out the bitches like Latrell Spreewell Smoking on exotic weed call it bamboo Actuall rare as hell, like the bitch Mewtu. hahahahha
yo.... blood is red just like red ink, like the color of my sink after washing the blood off your head to feed my pet minx.
next on my list is greatness, one chance and I'mma take this flyin high I feel weightless, not given tips you ain't my waitress so it's time that we face it, like a bitch you gotta take it because while you remain nameless I'm killin shit, aimless shapeshiftin but I'm shapeless, just like my rhymes homie they ageless now you that feel my basis, recognize everything dropped, classic beginnin to feel that feelin, magic; not evolution like jurassic hammer nailin every facet, read my pamphlet or enter casket cold world you need a jacket, or freddy crouger get'cho ass lit don't let me fool ya I'm just the devil in a new dress so pop that button and let me caress emotions that've been represeed nevertheless, I'll take your soul from you but not stolen, repossessed playin chess like your the queen and you got my king in check but no regrets while I been grindin for a minute or two, yet so influenced by the what the little devil on my shoulder says get out my biz and leave me alone, gotta prepare for this quiz the next movement of music has got me feelin it's what my job is like I'm the next wiz with an open-mind, redifine words I've aligned combined with being unsigned's got me feelin lost like I'm blind thinkin what's it take to try and fast-forward while I'm in rewind state of mind isn't new york, I'm thinkin about adding dollar signs my lines loopy like lupe, going fiasco on the mic hotter than tabasco but before I'm done with this shit I'll make you a believer and that's de facto
My rhymes are kinda silli like a Bill without his billi's or a 9 with out a milli i better cock it 'for i drop it oops i dropped it at least i rocked it but i couldn't stop it there it goes down that hole i should probably take a seat but i don't wanna have a seat cause i don't wanna fall asleep so just poor it in my drink and ima sip it till i lean hard drink got me moving slower than a retard