Stoned and listening to a relaxation album, in conjunction with what I was thinking about earlier today, here is the first poem I've written in about 5 years. I don't know how well I expressed myself, it was pretty stream of consciousness, so hopefully you can dig it. Swift Thoughts We are the art of apathy A distant speck from reality Now you see it, though you won't A semblance of compassion With our concerns being rationed An unfortunate truth that's built of lies A way of life we deny...deny...deny So further we traverse this path Bring with every existing moment Pain, death, rampage, with swift thoughts With swift thoughts, with swift thoughts Like a blade sharpened for a life time Meeting the edge of a boulder Stubborn boulder you must not refuse Time is short, but time is up, we refute We believe time is under our command We believe we deserve these lands Deserving nothing is a justification we deserve Why do we fight so hard for our lives But we don't fight for the lives of others The world understood in our minds Many fallacies of all kinds With swift thoughts, swift thoughts are gone We swim but we sink in the end We live but we lost, we lost in the end Swift energies, they find the way to swift thoughts and swift lives Swift lives for swift hours to make swift days.
not everybody comments on this shit .....trust me but its bot bad at all check the first link in my sig personally i think its more important that the words just flow then rhyme but thats just what "I" feel when i wright. Like anything the more you do the better you will get if you want to improve keep it up.... and btw- fuck it if people dont like it who cares! its nice when they do tho.... but do it for you what you like what makes you happy and the people who are supposed to get it will
