Elizibeth - The Dying of a Soul

Discussion in 'Philosophy' started by Unknown, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. I see my old friend Elizibeth. She stands alone in black drab in the middle of the field at our old Elementary School.. Where are we? The air smells of toxins. I feel a strange pain in my arm. I walk forward, twords Eliizibeth. The smell in the air gets pungent as I walk closer to Elizibeth. Two prison guards approach her. They molest her repeatedly. This is not kinky, not the thoughts recieved about sexual bondage. Its not for the guards' sexual pleasure...They are doing this to degrate her. Elizibeth rises slowly, as if the spirit in her has died. One guard slowly pulls his sword out, and quickly dices her head off. Then...my world goes black.


    Is or Isn't this deeply emotional? The unbelievable thing is i was at a notepad and wrote this down when I first felt the shrooms..
     
  2. its aright, pretty good at first. But when u said u did it durring your first few feelings of your shroom trip....sick man!! ill story! haha idk, just makes it better.....I loooove drugs.
     
  3. wow that was intense. I was wondering where you were going with it since I don't usually see stuff like that at the city.
     
  4. That was excellent, loved the detail. do you normally write this well, or was it just the shrooms:)?
     
  5. Wow. That was intense.
     
  6. No offense, but I have no idea what you are talking about, at all.
     
  7. I wish i remember what the hell i was thinking when i wrote this.
     

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