Chris Berry - A Different Kinda Feeling [Hip-Hop]

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by cberry8, Jul 29, 2012.

  1. #1 cberry8, Jul 29, 2012
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 3, 2012
    something new that i recorded this morning...looking for some feedback

    http://soundcloud.com/cberry8/chris-berry-a-different


    clouds of emotion, roll in, it's feeling kinda hard
    to breath in, demons, needing to write it off
    i'm really kinda lost, guess i'll let it all come to me
    flying higher while her words sting like a bumblebee
    it's humbling, the rumblings, resulting in a hunger
    wondering if i can be as happy as i was before
    once more i fell for her, fell so hard on my face
    what you see is what you get, nothing time can replace
    it's hard to be on that same road, to know where you're going
    but now it's snowing n cold n got you feeling so alone and
    it's been growing inside you, like a cancer you can't beat
    an answer you can't see, like where could this plan be?
    it vanished, to plan b, try to walk on water
    all you can do to please her, the one, she's daddy's daughter
    and what's harder is to see her when she ain't looking back
    so now i walk on by, a blank face, like a mask….it's in the past

    it's the feeling of ice cold rain that makes you see
    the sharp pain inside your chest when it almost hurts to breathe
    it's the place you wanna go where nobody else can be
    it's the beauty of her smile that's been bothering me
    it's the feeling of ice cold rain that makes you see
    all the words she used to say that would make you feel complete
    it's the place you wanna go where nobody else can be
    but she could look in my eyes, and know what's bothering me

    so much time has passed since i last saw her face
    isn't it funny what you remember whenever you hear her name
    all the places you both went n different times you shared
    behind the lids of your eyes as you stop and you stare
    i don't care for this daydreaming, it's the reason i forget
    the reason i moved on, no reason to forge it
    i used to just cling on, so much that i forced it
    now energy's wasted, saved gas on no more trips
    down memory lane, thought it was keeping me sane
    thought that the pain in my eyes was someone else's to blame
    shots in my head seemed to rang out, the evilness came down
    something that's my fault, zoomed in past the foreground
    most people will turn on the love they before found
    too busy riding the highs up, forget it can sink down
    i've come to begin to think
    what i could be now
    been thinking a long time,
    no wonder i see how
    a pair can mistreat these
    feelings that need trials
    sacrifice self for,
    unanswered redials
    be wise like a sycamore
    when looking for free smiles
    no money could add up,
    regardless i'm broke now

    it's the feeling of ice cold rain that makes you see
    the sharp pain inside your chest when it almost hurts to breathe
    it's the place you wanna go where nobody else can be
    it's the beauty of her smile that's been bothering me
    it's the feeling of ice cold rain that makes you see
    all the words she used to say that would make you feel complete
    it's the place you wanna go where nobody else can be
    but she could look in my eyes, and know what's bothering me​
     
  2. gonna bump it once I suppose...just because
     
  3. #3 cberry8, Aug 7, 2012
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 7, 2012
    1 more time just because it has views

    also looking for someone who makes beats...not really looking for bangers. but if you feel the style i'm going for you can tell i just want a well-mixed instrumental.
     
  4. I don't know why, but the beat sounded like the quality is low or something. I only really noticed it in the intro.

    Good shit on the track itself. If the Jcole avatar is a hint to the influence of your style, I wouldn't say you two aren't too far off writing-wise.

    You have a certain way with words thats just dope to me. If you got on a better beat it would make it that much doper. Hopefully you can find a producer that compliments your style.
     

  5. yeah, quality is shit, only using a $100 usb mic...appreciate the feed man
     
  6. nice man, i actually kinda like the beat (although the quality its self is kinda low),did you make it yourself? it's got a nujabe's ish vibe, combined with ur hook it reminds me of feather.

    i also like the sentiment of ur music combined with ur sig. shows ur doin it for the right reasons. maybe just work on ur delivery a bit, chill on the mic, it's nice man.
     
  7. appreciate it man
     

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