I'm sick but I felt the urge to record some shit..give it a listen [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jjkIQsvLUk]YouTube - phILLy- Left in the Night[/ame] I'm barely breathin but I'm eatin So I don't complain about the rain and the pain every evenin I'm not a vegan but I'm not about the beef Cheifin on the balconies cuz I'm not about the streets I'm kinda keepin on, keepin strong like Cheech n chong, I'ma b the feature song, I'ma keep along I don't needa bong to get by, and I got my own lines to get high..now let my Best rhymes console you n enter your brain Maybe then you won't remember the pain I keep it burnin til the end of the flame Even so my ember remains, unchanged til the end of my game I'm at the end of my change so I keep my two cents In my back pocket, no you cannot cop it, cuz it's my copper I got more patience than five doctors But I'm sick of pacin like blind shoppers I keep makin mistakes, but I pray These wrongs will make a right before I'm left in the night...
You were probably going more for flow here, by that I mean you wrote it just to record. Either way I loved the flow in it, loved the multi's. But honestly, I like your other shit better man. Just me though
Any time my man, if you get a chance too the next couple of days I have 2 writtens on bbe, always looking for feed