Changed My Style A Little Bit

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by DreamAwake, May 8, 2014.

  1. #1 DreamAwake, May 8, 2014
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    dddd

     
  2. the beat was good, real chill. the vocals threw me though, the transition was rough
     
  3. thanks for the feedback
     
  4. it was all chill and shit and I cranked it up in my headphones and was like "damn dude that's a nice beat." Then the vocals came on and I nearly threw my computer at my roommate's head
     
  5. #5 ReturnFire333, May 8, 2014
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    Yeah those vocals are terrible, from the sound to the rhymes. You won't make any money rapping but if you have fun that's all that counts.
     
  6. i can do it less poetic and more mainstream but thanks its just for fun anyway...ways to release anguish and whatnot.
     
  7. #7 ReturnFire333, May 8, 2014
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    Lol I wasen't being serious dude, you didn't have to take the song down. I've heard bad rapping believe me but that was decent. You did have me cracking up at "all the women I want to wed... are dead" though  :laughing: Put it back up. 
     
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    Ok I was being serious lol but now that I dwell on it more it actually wasn't a bad track. Are you white? I think I just have a thing against white people rapping...
     
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    here i re-uploaded but if yall gonna hate like crazy il take it down again
     
    https://soundcloud.com/tesselated/life
     
    "a peace pipe and a harmonica, down the steps"...one time i was hearing voices and a harmonica playing downstairs
     
    "i couldn't have wept"...my eyes were so dry from weed that night i couldn't have cried even if i tried
     
    "all the women i wanna wed are dead"...janis joplin is the love of my life <3 <3 <3...and every other girl ive ever liked is dead to me
     
    i really dont think its that bad but the consensus is it is
     
    there u go

     
  10. #10 ReturnFire333, May 8, 2014
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    Hell yeah dude it's a decent track honestly I was being over judgemental because I don't have enough sleep right now so my discretion is awol...


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  11. #11 DreamAwake, May 8, 2014
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    no worries you dont have to be so nice.  i dont get easily offended.  i have pretty thick skin at this point when it comes to most things.
     
     
    just no point in leaving a track up there thats gonna get bombarded left and right idk.  i dont smoke, i live in a group home.  usually when i listen to my raps high i dont enjoy them but theyre better sober.
     
  12. #12 ReturnFire333, May 8, 2014
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    I listened again its a good track. Not terrible by any means, I've listened to terrible rap lol.


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