When the trees and grass are gone and the wind no longer sweeps the land, I will remain. Today. Tomorrow. Forever. When the rivers are dry and the birds cease to sing their song, I will remain. Today. Tomorrow. Forever. And I am here now, this very second. I swim with the fish and fly with the birds, graze with the sheep and sleep with the lion. I witness the highs and lift from the lows. Some say I remain in the eyes of the beholder, but I know. I am beauty. I am forever. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.
Really nice. For the last line, some say I remain in the eyes of the beholder, but I know. I am beauty, I am forever. It can be something else as well. What do you think?