*BATTLE TOURNY* TheGZA, smilingslowly, George Foreman, and HippoPotamus420

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  1. #1 cberry8, May 10, 2011
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    NO CHECK IN'S NECESSARY FOR THIS ROUND!!
    48 HOURS TO POST YOUR VERSES!!


    Remember the rules, 8 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below.

    Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours, then the winners, in this case, will be decided. Because there are 4 contestants, the

    When writing your verses consider the following:
    NO FEEDING/FLIPPING
    NO RECYCLING
    NO SWAYING
    NO BITING

    Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above.

    In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either. You MUST vote for 2 contestants for this round.



    smilingslowly
    ya’ll say preliminary, I say incendiary
    already on fire, like a four-fifty-one dictionary
    this thread is ablaze with my sizzling quickness
    gonna need a tsunami to get me to quit this
    when I spit mist, it still comes out as flames
    beware the hot newcomer to these rap battle games
    not gonna change, this image of me on top
    now you got nothin’ to say, cuz your jaw’s fuckin’ locked

    HippPotamus420
    playing like heath ledger jokers?, i'll have ya throat smiling at me slowly
    you probably think it was literal when ya pops shouted out blow me
    these little fucktards thought the story was bitter yet sweet
    ya fam now eat, pray, love, at the wake nobody speaks
    I new balance, so i play center roles in rap scenes
    lapping track fiends in a pair of sagged gap jeans
    losing is no option, i'll lay it simple and plain
    like bitches DTF this guy, then left pissed in the rain

    George Foreman
    jiminy cricket bitch its hitler with a pitching wedge,
    a fifth of liquor down the hatchet and it isn't even midday yet,
    a spliff the size of justin bieber, smoke it till it hits me then,
    pick my golf club up and then i'm beating you until your dead,
    these remedial bars are worse than shit, they're dysentery with sweetcorn in,
    i'll drink some petrol, piss on you, then give your ass a cigarette
    i'm swinging and i'm hitting em, cause foreman doesn't give a shit
    if i don't win this battle well then ya'll must be illiterate

    TheGZA
    better look lowly, smilingslowly,
    if your eyes meet mine ill make ya more holy
    than jesus reborn in guacamole, fuck what yall told me
    your rhymes are hollow, i shatter em like glass with each bar that follows
    got me in a prelim, with motha fuckas thinkin theyre another slim
    imma fill em to the rim like brim, my temper's short like that bitch kim
    i stim-ulate with schapps, learned it all from my pop's, im pullin all the stops
    if george dont like it, im snappin necks, foreman first, baby whos next
    hippo hides i collect, like a radar i detect find even the littlest speck.
     
  2. You made like 8 of these TOURNEY threads in less than 10 minutes and I have no clue what the hell the "contest" is about......

    Either you just went completely off the deep end in a mental state or someone has hi~jacked your grasscitty blade profile/thread......

    either way..... these topics will be closed at tha very least


    :)

    say cheese to a moderator!!!

    :) CHEEZE!!!! :)
     
  3. wuttt? ^^^

    should i post a verse or what
     
  4. ya’ll say preliminary, I say incendiary
    already on fire, like a four-fifty-one dictionary
    this thread is ablaze with my sizzling quickness
    gonna need a tsunami to get me to quit this
    when I spit mist, it still comes out as flames
    beware the hot newcomer to these rap battle games
    not gonna change, this image of me on top
    now you got nothin’ to say, cuz your jaw’s fuckin’ locked
     
  5. ^^^ I wanna sing along to your words!

    :)


    LOL! Yeas!
     
  6. #7 HippoPotamus420, May 10, 2011
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    playing like heath ledger jokers?, i'll have ya throat smiling at me slowly
    you probably think it was literal when ya pops shouted out blow me
    these little fucktards thought the story was bitter yet sweet
    ya fam now eat, pray, love, at the wake nobody speaks
    I new balance, so i play center roles in rap scenes
    lapping track fiends in a pair of sagged gap jeans
    losing is no option, i'll lay it simple and plain
    like bitches DTF this guy, then left pissed in the rain
     
  7. just thought i'd sit and write a verse i plan to have a toke..
    yo i think this dude is smiling slowly cuz hes too dense to understand the joke..
    speaking of jokes- The Gza? you dont know shit bout the Wu Tang Clan!!!111!!
    you deserve to be kicked in the face by Liu Kang, man.
    or maybe get stomped in the face by a hippo , Fatality!!!
    srsly bro, u sure picked a strange animal to get turned on by beastiality.
    and george foreman i'd hate to say it but i have ta spill the beans..
    i'd beat your ass like muhammad ali did in Manila, phillippines

    :D just for fun no votes needed lol GL Boys.
     
  8. dude just no...do that in the rap battle thread or the post your verse thread
     
  9. better look lowly, smilingslowly,
    if your eyes meet mine ill make ya more holy
    than jesus reborn in guacamole, fuck what yall told me
    your rhymes are hollow, i shatter em like glass with each bar that follows
    got me in a prelim, with motha fuckas thinkin theyre another slim
    imma fill em to the rim like brim, my temper's short like that bitch kim
    i stim-ulate with schapps, learned it all from my pop's, im pullin all the stops
    if george dont like it, im snappin necks, foreman first, baby whos next
    hippo hides i collect, like a radar i detect find even the littlest speck.

    i could not think of how to set this off lol
     
  10. #11 TexRx, May 11, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: May 11, 2011
    My winning Vote goes To!! [drum roll!] /.......

    Tha Gza!! ....For the Rap line = 'jesus reborn in guacamole'

    :)

    Your pic!! ~=> Jesus Reborn as a Lizard!! He's running on water....that time!! LoL!!

    [​IMG]



    :)
     
  11. yo i just found this gimme an hour got to do some shit then i'll be back to drop some boulders on you bitches
     
  12. #13 George Foreman, May 11, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: May 12, 2011
    jiminy cricket bitch its hitler with a pitching wedge,
    a fifth of liquor down the hatchet and it isn't even midday yet,
    a spliff the size of justin bieber, smoke it till it hits me then,
    pick my golf club up and then i'm beating you until your dead,
    these remedial bars are worse than shit, they're dysentery with sweetcorn in,
    i'll drink some petrol, piss on you, then give your ass a cigarette
    i'm swinging and i'm hitting em, cause foreman doesn't give a shit
    if i don't win this battle well then ya'll must be illiterate
     
  13. hippopotamous and gza + 1
    it was pretty close though.
     
  14. bump cuz people aren't voting
     
  15. +1 Hippo & Smiling

    For both, better overall drops, better punches as well.

    these little fucktards thought the story was bitter yet sweet
    ya fam now eat, pray, love, at the wake nobody speaks

    this thread is ablaze with my sizzling quickness
    gonna need a tsunami to get me to quit this
    when I spit mist, it still comes out as flames
    beware the hot newcomer to these rap battle games

    best lines from both
     
  16. +1 to hippo and George
     
  17. ya'll haters

    except kannabis hes keeewllll
     
  18. smilingslowly + Foremen


    for smiling: I lovedthe first line dictionary-incendiary and overall it was well compacted/composed.

    for foremen: I thought his rhyme scheme was superior than the others, but it had some typos/sounded better whens it would be sung. He didn't use a basic style like AA,BB,CC, although he rhymed in couples, he also continued his original rhyme at the end of the song.
     


  19. surely this doesnt count becuase not all the bars were posted by then?
     

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