NO CHECK IN'S NECESSARY FOR THIS ROUND!! 48 HOURS TO POST YOUR VERSES!! Remember the rules, 8 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours, then the winners, in this case, will be decided. Because there are 4 contestants, the When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above. In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either. You MUST vote for 2 contestants for this round. Sparkin I'm at ease, so I proceed to leave fakes broken, face opened, Heard ya'll plea but I forsee no future for these lame hoes when, I'm on the top of the food chain, too smooth mayne, get too brave? I'll kill you lames, and remove a few brains... with brute strength, Then get your mothers there to clean the mess yall made, No rest for days till they all depressed and crazed, Still wana test your fate?, Whats next to say? I'll wreck these fakes, Film ya death and Just keep pressin play till the record breaks. Marijuana Time Time for extermination I’m performing trephination’s like a game of operation Look into your brain, and see your imagination You dream of being a big sensation of the population like The Situation of the next generation I’ll cut off your circulation, and leave you departed Put an ice sickle through your chest so you can die cold hearted Jumpstart ya back up just to let you know you got outsmarted This verse is just the first man I’m just getting started R y a n Higher degrees I spit fire burn your attire on the track Light a flame under your ass keep you stuck in the wax These tacky folk have no sense with common rhymes that be tense Performing crimes on the paper just to scribble it out in the flesh It’s simple to attest to be the best claim the damage stems from your wrecks Rest assure my pen connects words that’ll sweep it all under your desk Off a fresh night of rest they say they think deep like they’re a prodigy You see to me that’s just an oddity, then what’s my name when you honor me? JDilla This is my first text battle, none of y'all fakes have heard of Jay so to get some attention, i'm comin out to break ya vertebrae i'll take your turn away, I ain't spittin no nice shit unless you're talkin' bout my verse, my writtens are priceless i'm gifted and quite sick, bring hits like a nightstick these brothers actin' fake like the script thats in White Chicks my knife slits foes, but my knife is a pen i'm strikin' these men like lighting, i'm fightin' to win.
I'm at ease, so I proceed to leave fakes broken, face opened, Heard ya'll plea but I forsee no future for these lame hoes when, I'm on the top of the food chain, too smooth mayne, get too brave? I'll kill you lames, and remove a few brains... with brute strength, Then get your mothers there to clean the mess yall made, No rest for days till they all depressed and crazed, Still wana test your fate?, Whats next to say? I'll wreck these fakes, Film ya death and Just keep pressin play till the record breaks.
UpFromTheSkies said to type up 8 lines, so thats what I did.. I think you got the beginning of the thread wrong cberry.
Time for extermination I'm performing trephination's like a game of operation Look into your brain, and see your imagination You dream of being a big sensation of the population like The Situation of the next generation I'll cut off your circulation, and leave you departed Put an ice sickle through your chest so you can die cold hearted Jumpstart ya back up just to let you know you got outsmarted This verse is just the first man I'm just getting started
Higher degrees I spit fire burn your attire on the track Light a flame under your ass keep you stuck in the wax These tacky folk have no sense with common rhymes that be tense Performing crimes on the paper just to scribble it out in the flesh It’s simple to attest to be the best claim the damage stems from your wrecks Rest assure my pen connects words that’ll sweep it all under your desk Off a fresh night of rest they say they think deep like they’re a prodigy You see to me that’s just an oddity, then what’s my name when you honor me?
This is my first text battle, none of y'all fakes have heard of Jay so to get some attention, i'm comin out to break ya vertebrae i'll take your turn away, I ain't spittin no nice shit unless you're talkin' bout my verse, my writtens are priceless i'm gifted and quite sick, bring hits like a nightstick these brothers actin' fake like the script thats in White Chicks my knife slits foes, but my knife is a pen i'm strikin' these men like lighting, i'm fightin' to win.
no you're not supposed to vote on the thread you're in my votes go to marijuana time and jdilla marijuana's was best imo, great flow, creative imagery, and chock full of good rhymes that didn't interrupt the rhythm of it hard to pick a second one, went with jdilla because it was cohesive, the whole thing fit together well, good similies and good transitions
Sparkin - Had the best punches as far as I'm concerned, and while the multi's really weren't the greatest, you still had great inners and outers that kept the flow moving. JDilla - Multi's all over the place, good punches as well....but what stood out to me most was the flow, what did it for me was: i'll take your turn away, I ain't spittin no nice shit unless you're talkin' bout my verse, my writtens are priceless i'm gifted and quite sick, bring hits like a nightstick these brothers actin' fake like the script thats in White Chicks straight fire... +1 Sparkin & JDilla
imma have to go wit sparkin and Jdilla. they had the tightest flows and made the most sense. sparkin got the old fashioned battle bite in his verse. Jdilla, haha. YEE. lyrical pen and white chicks. thats sick, nuff said
Sparkin&Jdilla edit cause their stuff made sense and had nice multis' w/ punches better than the other two.
sparkin then jdilla. arguably had the best opening and finishing lines in the this thread, also there was no flaws in their middle content either(neither did the other two). did the best job of kept it on point. kinda bs that 4 people have to compete for two spots, and no one has even responded in my thread of 3 =\