Each person will have 36 hours to check in, once both have checked in there will be a 24 hour window to post your verses. Remember the rules, 16 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours before a winner is decided. When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above. PandaBud dont panic, dont run, just stand and be scared my freestyle outdoes your writtens everytime theyre paired. your rapping impaired, a vermin ensnared in a vermin trap i designed and prepared. no matter your aims youll always get beat there no peace in your dreams, u cant even sleep there. im death in your nightmares and always reap there harvesting souls that i barbeque and eat there. oregonized is about to be morguealized, body parts organized and institutionalized for scientists to theorize and hypothesize how he ceased being alive from lyrical drive-bys. its high tide, he's wading in the shallows and cant swim im serving richter 10 on the scale, bringing tsunamis in. im lyrical painting, filling up your fearss to the brim your ego-fainting, imagining dreams of has-been wins. Oregonized ill burn a hole in your head like damage from sun rays and then spam you with gun play, i drive backwards on one ways just to be a dick, what i bust freely is sick, yours isn't, one way i trust you'll be needing a hit is that your bleeding a bit from a slit, or incision, your decision, please try to pry at my anger, i release tigers as i fly out of my hanger, that made no sense because im talking to a abscessed, whack dressed, actress i think, blood on the mattress from draining and maintaining a hazardous leak, i laugh then i eat, you whack cats should go back to street, back to selling crack an aftermath of the heat, and after that strap a gat to your cheek, find me to pull the cap back ya now thats beef, a rat without teeth and your trapped without cheese jack your sack and peace it, smash your rap to pieces because im a beast better believe it or see the deep shit, keep it, your whack style i dont need it, i bleed good music so i smile when chiefin, but get profiled when im geekin you get mild but say your wild and peakin, weakling, beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust, i think pandabud is looking for a man to love i'll banish ya im not the man to fuck, with, cause bitch you can get cut quick, your slut bitch suck dick like trucker rides, busted quick on both her eyes and then wrote on her thigh man you know its nice, and my flow is tight when i hold mic, yours has an overbite because you over write, VOTING RULES Voting should also be based upon... PUNCHES NAME PLAY WORD PLAY PERSONALS FLOW MULTI'S ORIGINALITY In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either.. PandaBud - 1 Oregonized - 6
dont panic, dont run, just stand and be scared my freestyle outdoes your writtens everytime theyre paired. your rapping impaired, a vermin ensnared in a vermin trap i designed and prepared. no matter your aims youll always get beat there no peace in your dreams, u cant even sleep there. im death in your nightmares and always reap there harvesting souls that i barbeque and eat there. oregonized is about to be morguealized, body parts organized and institutionalized for scientists to theorize and hypothesize how he ceased being alive from lyrical drive-bys. its high tide, he's wading in the shallows and cant swim im serving richter 10 on the scale, bringing tsunamis in. im lyrical painting, filling up your fearss to the brim your ego-fainting, imagining dreams of has-been wins.
ill burn a hole in your head like damage from sun rays and then spam you with gun play, i drive backwards on one ways just to be a dick, what i bust freely is sick, yours isn't, one way i trust you'll be needing a hit is that your bleeding a bit from a slit, or incision, your decision, please try to pry at my anger, i release tigers as i fly out of my hanger, that made no sense because im talking to a abscessed, whack dressed, actress i think, blood on the mattress from draining and maintaining a hazardous leak, i laugh then i eat, you whack cats should go back to street, back to selling crack an aftermath of the heat, and after that strap a gat to your cheek, find me to pull the cap back ya now thats beef, a rat without teeth and your trapped without cheese jack your sack and peace it, smash your rap to pieces because im a beast better believe it or see the deep shit, keep it, your whack style i dont need it, i bleed good music so i smile when chiefin, but get profiled when im geekin you get mild but say your wild and peakin, weakling, beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust, i think pandabud is looking for a man to love i'll banish ya im not the man to fuck, with, cause bitch you can get cut quick, your slut bitch suck dick like trucker rides, busted quick on both her eyes and then wrote on her thigh man you know its nice,
Oregon came with a better flow and nicer concepts. ,lol @ the tucker bj. panda had everything oregon has but just outclassed in this one. yo if you can express deeper meanings in your stuff it would be some really sick stuff panda. +1 bansai, i mean, Oregonized,
I liked the punches from Oregon, but panda was right up there like with cberry and MT it was close until i heard a the last few lines and oregon, theses were solid "but get profiled when im geekin you get mild but say your wild and peakin, weakling, beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust, i think pandabud is looking for a man to love i'll banish ya im not the man to fuck, with, cause bitch you can get cut quick, your slut bitch suck dick like trucker rides, busted quick on both her eyes and then wrote on her thigh man you know its nice, and my flow is tight when i hold mic, yours has an overbite because you over write" i felt like oregon changed up his rhyme scheme more and i like that so i gotta go with Oregon on this one
Voting should also be based upon... im going by numbers and w/e. 10 being thebest PANdAbud * PUNCHES-6/10 i saw a lot of 'big' words but no knockout.tsunami line was the best * NAME PLAY 8/10 last verse with his name did it with some good words but that high score was from that only major punch in it really. * WORD PLAY4/10 the words were good and rhymed but its plain. technical generic. * PERSONALS low * FLOW 5/10 straight forward flow it seems. * MULTI'S 3/10 * ORIGINALITY 3/10 it was really average, good words but really average. Oregonized Voting should also be based upon... * PUNCHES 7/10 it felt like i was getting super jabbed over and over.no knockouts * NAME PLAY none * WORD PLAY 9/10 good average rhymes but went really good with it * PERSONALS 7/10 how personal can an internet battle be but u put words in my eyes to describe panda. * FLOW 9/10 * MULTI'S 8/10 * ORIGINALITY 0/10 The word play/flow and 'multis' is what made Oregonized Verse better its like.... panda got the words but nothing else and oregonized got the flow/multiple hits but originality is low. overall PANDABUD- 4/10 OREGONIZED- 6/10
I have to give this to Ore as well, overall the scheme that he used was superior. Again, he has the horrorcore thing going for him, but he managed to use the last few bars to incorporate his punches. Most noteworthy was... keep it, your whack style i dont need it, i bleed good music so i smile when chiefin, but get profiled when im geekin you get mild but say your wild and peakin, weakling, beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust, i think pandabud is looking for a man to love i'll banish ya im not the man to fuck, Good battle though guys +1 Oregonized
good battle bro, i didnt know if i would bring my a game but i tried hard against you! thanks for the votes guys!
this is a close battle, I keep going back and forth. My vote's for Panda. His made more sense, he tied the lines together better (conceptually). I liked his punches. thought his first 8 was very solid. Also incorporated oregon's name well. The only weak lines of his were the final two. oregon- had better multis, flow, but I felt it was too busy and the main thing that hurt was that it wasn't too cohesive thematically and there were lines like these: "but get profiled when im geekin you get mild but say your wild and peakin, weakling, beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust," that didn't make sense to me.
"he gets 'profiled' when he's geekin" - when he's high he gets profiled.. "you get mild but say your wild and peakin" -panda's not hot but say's he's on top of his game, he's a weakling.. beat me and see green, your envious of my sweet speech, saw you so i ran to bust, - you cant beat me you lust my speech, and when i saw you i came to bust..
kinda the same way i voted for berry's battle.. this one pretty easily goes to Or for me rhymescheme complexity, originality, flow. that shit started off hot.. dope flow from the getgo on that first line good shit though PandaBud keep it up and you'll keep gettin better +1 Oregonized
everytime i see your name Skies, reminds me of the beginning of this song... [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IoPeNC4k_0]YouTube - Gang Starr - Above The Clouds (Feat. Inspectah Deck)[/ame] off topic lol but i seriously end up listening to that song probably 3 or 4 times a day because of you
Panda bud didnt even attack this dude with punches , which is you know the purpose of the battle lol + 1 Oregano