*BATTLE TOURNY* Marijuana Time vs cberry8

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by cberry8, May 14, 2011.

  1. #1 cberry8, May 14, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: May 15, 2011
    Each person will have 36 hours to check in, once both have checked in there will be a 24 hour window to post your verses.

    Remember the rules, 16 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below.

    Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours before a winner is decided.

    When writing your verses consider the following:
    NO FEEDING/FLIPPING
    NO RECYCLING
    NO SWAYING
    NO BITING

    Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above.



    cberry8
    I was told not to mess with Marijuana cause I ain't got the Time
    I was told it's bad for your health, Well...Shit, It's too late for mine
    This dude's makin' dimes, Thinks it's worth more than my 2 cents
    But who says you're sellin', I'll tell 'em you make no sense
    I build walls to beat your fence, It's like I'm battling Huck Finn
    N-word Jim had a better shot, And it's illegal to even talk to him!
    It's a remarkable win, So I'll tap in my twin, Or even better let you rhyme alone
    To get your timin' going, Before your verbs start slowin' and your sweat's your cologne
    Unmasked by my verbal cyclone, Feed you a Milkbone cause you're doggin' it...
    Sloberin' spit smells like armpits when you try to battle, No arguments!
    I'm being honest with him, I've got no beard and my first name ain't Abe
    But if I was in his shoes I'd rather free the Jews then let this mutt leave the trade
    Cause, See I'm still underpaid, And I work 2 jobs, 3 if we count working you...
    But it ain't heavy lifting, No gears needed shifting, Even the vote count is skewed!
    Your shit's over, Misused, Left with nothing but energy wasted
    So here's a Nutrigrain bar to help heal your scars...Then I'll tell you how victory tasted

    Marijuana Time
    Listen up Halle berry, I’m very scary fucking this rap in missionary
    I’m on top of my vocabulary, slaying lyrics like a commentary revolutionary
    My mind’s confined in solitary, I’m thinking deep
    My flows steep, your about knee deep in a heap of cheap speak
    I’m tweaked, schizophrenic freaked
    Lyrics so mystique you repeat, and they’ll bust your cheek
    Your like an antique, your best rhymes have been leaked
    Your times up bro accept your defeat
    I got you dancing like happy feet on concrete
    Follow the beat, I’ll take you down street
    Cover you in sheets, and drop you off in the ghetto
    Milano stilleto has you screaming in falsetto
    Your such a guido your ego was voted cheesier than Cheeto’s
    Only you could be cheesy enough to turn a Frito into a Dorito
    You suck like a mosquito, your killin me son
    This battle is done, I have you burnt like a bun


    VOTING RULES

    Voting should also be based upon...

    • PUNCHES
    • NAME PLAY
    • WORD PLAY
    • PERSONALS
    • FLOW
    • MULTI'S
    • ORIGINALITY

    In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either..


    cberry8 - 9
    Marijuana Time - 0
     
  2. Check, I may not be able to drop until tomorrow but I'm here now
     
  3. check, I'll post mine up later tonight
     

  4. I was told not to mess with Marijuana cause I ain't got the Time
    I was told it's bad for your health, Well...Shit, It's too late for mine
    This dude's makin' dimes, Thinks it's worth more than my 2 cents
    But who says you're sellin', I'll tell 'em you make no sense
    I build walls to beat your fence, It's like I'm battling Huck Finn
    N-word Jim had a better shot, And it's illegal to even talk to him!
    It's a remarkable win, So I'll tap in my twin, Or even better let you rhyme alone
    To get your timin' going, Before your verbs start slowin' and your sweat's your cologne
    Unmasked by my verbal cyclone, Feed you a Milkbone cause you're doggin' it...
    Sloberin' spit smells like armpits when you try to battle, No arguments!
    I'm being honest with him, I've got no beard and my first name ain't Abe
    But if I was in his shoes I'd rather free the Jews then let this mutt leave the trade
    Cause, See I'm still underpaid, And I work 2 jobs, 3 if we count working you...
    But it ain't heavy lifting, No gears needed shifting, Even the vote count is skewed!
    Your shit's over, Misused, Left with nothing but energy wasted
    So here's a Nutrigrain bar to help heal your scars...Then I'll tell you how victory tasted

    Good luck man
     
  5. Listen up Halle berry, I'm very scary fucking this rap in missionary
    I'm on top of my vocabulary, slaying lyrics like a commentary revolutionary
    My mind's confined in solitary, I'm thinking deep
    My flows steep, your about knee deep in a heap of cheap speak
    I'm tweaked, schizophrenic freaked
    Lyrics so mystique you repeat, and they'll bust your cheek
    Your like an antique, your best rhymes have been leaked
    Your times up bro accept your defeat
    I got you dancing like happy feet on concrete
    Follow the beat, I'll take you down street
    Cover you in sheets, and drop you off in the ghetto
    Milano stilleto has you screaming in falsetto
    Your such a guido your ego was voted cheesier than Cheeto's
    Only you could be cheesy enough to turn a Frito into a Dorito
    You suck like a mosquito, your killin me son
    This battle is done, I have you burnt like a bun
     
  6. Nice verse. Let the voting begin [​IMG]
     
  7. #8 TexRx, May 15, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: May 15, 2011
    I'll vote for cberry8 because.........

    The flow was pretty tight and the last four [4] lines had tha song to it.... in my head... I can feel a rythym and beat just reading those 4 lines

    ANd also for the 2 lines = "I build walls to beat your fence, It's like I'm battling Huck Finn
    N-word Jim had a better shot, And it's illegal to even talk to him"

    pretty original to me....

    And I'm ready to push play on both raps! Well done!!


    :)
     
  8. cberry had my jumping on the first line hhaha

    they both came with punchs but not to many multis, but in the end i like berrys for his flow it could pick it up and it really worked
     
  9. berry kicked it off wit something sick and had alot original wit. "This dude's makin' dimes, Thinks it's worth more than my 2 cents" haha that was ill. the first time i went through the verse tho it was bit hard to articulate, still a good read.

    MT came hard, he mighta had more punches, but it didnt make sense at times. for example: "slaying lyrics like a commentary revolutionary" :confused:
    however, happy feet on concrete, fritos into doritos?? haha thats ill.

    im gonna have to pick berry for an overall more solid verse. it was pretty close for me, i had to look at the whole thing rather than individual punches.
     
  10. It makes sense in it's own way :smoke:
     
  11. gotta go with berry, i thought it was even but those last for lines by berry got me

    "Cause, See I'm still underpaid, And I work 2 jobs, 3 if we count working you...
    But it ain't heavy lifting, No gears needed shifting, Even the vote count is skewed!
    Your shit's over, Misused, Left with nothing but energy wasted
    So here's a Nutrigrain bar to help heal your scars...Then I'll tell you how victory tasted"

    so i got berry i thought both had a solid flow and some good punches, it was even till i read that and i thought that put him above MT. Props to both tho.
     
  12. Berry took this decisively.

    MT wasn't horrible, but his syllables were off and Berry pretty much killed shit.

    "it's a remarkable win, So I'll tap in my twin, Or even better let you rhyme alone
    To get your timin' going, Before your verbs start slowin' and your sweat's your cologne"

    Best line of the battle.

    +1 berry
     
  13. berry had the flow, creativeness, and punches to takeout MT.

    MT- this was better then the other stuff ive seen from you.

    +1 berry
     
  14. bumping for more votes
     
  15. yeah, this easily goes to berry.

    rhymescheme complexity, originality, flow.

    that said.. not bad at all MT keep it up homie youll learn n improve

    +1 berry
     
  16. cberry for strong bars all the way through
     
  17. Berry- hit with punches, nice multis and most of it if not all made sense

    half of MT's verse was just rhyming words and hal of them made no sense

    leak lke an atique? lolwut?

    Vote Berry

    also how did this kid make it out of the 4 in his thread I dont evben want to look at the other dude from his bracket lol
     
  18. This vote closes in just over 90 minutes....
     
  19. Battle closed...berry advances
     

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