Each person will have 36 hours to check in, once both have checked in there will be a 24 hour window to post your verses. Remember the rules, 16 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours before a winner is decided. When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above. JDilla I'm deadly, you ain't ready man, i'm heavy with bars ahead and in charge, your mothafuckin' neck will come off i'm settin it off, yeah then i'm lettin' it drop and you ain't gotta step on me because i'm headin beyond my heads in the stars dog and i'm gettin' to mars i've got a team by my side and they're ready to spar you wanna meet eye to eye? i'm always ready for war you ain't a stunner, you're another fuckin' head on my wall and you ain't gunnin, i'm the hunter and i'm headed for more you better ante up so we can settle the score i'll knock your mothafuckin dreams down, i'm gettin it on and you don't wanna fuck with me Puff cause i'll step to your door you ain't a rapper, faggot. you're only a fan it's time for you to pull up your pants and let go of my hand so what up cock sucker, you think you hot ma' fucka you gon' rot and suffer when I drop this summer. PuffPuffHOLD Jdilla may fill uh line with rhymes but repeats punches like nine times to duck this creativities’ heat mixed with the speech my mind grinds, your style plays hide n seek, with all your might you seek flows so i suppose to hide’s your only chance to sight a feat, hide in grief, to find me’s defeat, be honored prelims give wins like its “nike’s” twin, cause damn your tongues a weak limb, you’re gassed up thinking Jdillas reincarnation is you ill brake it to you, grab a tissue truth is nobody miss you, i’m a puppet being the master of you as a subject it aint the toughest to school so let the ruckus commence, your structure gets punctured when I expose its bunker the hiding spots hot my syllables swarm you in rhythmical jerks, kill you off this earth with words tailored to be scorned then Later torn n scrap booked to keeps others warned, you can stab aids in my brain that still aint enough fact is your wack in ways lames would give up and pity your stuff, VOTING RULES Voting should also be based upon... PUNCHES NAME PLAY WORD PLAY PERSONALS FLOW MULTI'S ORIGINALITY In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either.. JDilla - 3 PuffPuffHOLD - 5
I'm deadly, you ain't ready man, i'm heavy with bars ahead and in charge, your mothafuckin' neck will come off i'm settin it off, yeah then i'm lettin' it drop and you ain't gotta step on me because i'm headin beyond my heads in the stars dog and i'm gettin' to mars i've got a team by my side and they're ready to spar you wanna meet eye to eye? i'm always ready for war you ain't a stunner, you're another fuckin' head on my wall and you ain't gunnin, i'm the hunter and i'm headed for more man, you better ante up so we can settle the score i'll knock your mothafuckin dreams down, i'm gettin it on and you don't wanna fuck with me Puff cause i'll step to your door you ain't a rapper, faggot. you're only a fan it's time for you to pull up your pants and let go of my hand so what up cock sucker, you think you hot ma' fucka? you gon' rot and suffer when I drop this summer.
Jdilla may fill uh line with rhymes but repeats punches like nine times to duck this creativities' heat mixed with the speech my mind grinds, your style plays hide n seek, with all your might you seek flows so i suppose to hide's your only chance to sight a feat, hide in grief, to find me's defeat, be honored prelims give wins like its “nike's†twin, cause damn your tongues a weak limb, you're gassed up thinking Jdillas reincarnation is you ill brake it to you, grab a tissue truth is nobody miss you, i'm a puppet being the master of you as a subject it aint the toughest to school so let the ruckus commence, your structure gets punctured when I expose its bunker the hiding spots hot my syllables swarm you in rhythmical jerks, kill you off this earth with words tailored to be scorned then Later torn n scrap booked to keeps others warned, you can stab aids in my brain that still aint enough fact is your wack in ways lames would give up and pity your stuff, "nike" is the goddess of victory.
PUNCHES - Dilla NAME PLAY - No one WORD PLAY - PuffPuff PERSONALS - PuffPuff FLOW - Dilla MULTI'S - PuffPuff ORIGINALITY - PuffPuff Thats how I'm going to break it down this time. Both had their shining moments but Puff edged it with more original material and better multies. +1 PuffPuffHOLD
Definately puffpuffhold...for the Win My reasons... 1 ~ Lots of flow w/o tons of curse~words. I'm down w/ N` z talking $hit about other N` z but faggots are just what they are...clean lyrics in these tourney's get ++++ points from me 2 ~ right from the start I knew 'puffpuff' was making a solid rebuttal to his competitors rap 3 ~ One heck of an apostraphe in the line = to duck this creativities’ heat mixed with the speech my mind grinds 4 ~ And finally = then Later torn n scrap booked to keeps others warned.... A real rapper leaves a warning to foes after tha battle is won
PUNCHES - PPH, My personal favorite was probably Dilla's, but the fact is that PPH had more of them aimed directly at Dilla, so that's why he gets this category. NAME PLAY - N/A WORD PLAY - JDilla, both had a few examples but my favorite had to do with the 'head on the wall' bar PERSONALS - PPH, Dilla had a lot of hot lines but PPH took more shots at his opponent instead of self-hyping FLOW - JDilla, pretty seamless MULTI'S - JDilla, both had multi's but Dilla was able to compose better ones at that, along with using multi's that weren't just single multi-syllabic words ORIGINALITY - JDilla, I felt that PPH had a lot of bars that get reused over and over again, not all, but it's how I felt both times I read it +1 JDilla
Puff Puff hit with nice punches Dillas flowed smooth but didn't exactly attack puff.. overall Puff + 1
JD. Fashooo, creativity, flows, lines in general overall. not shabby puff puff, neck and neck just bout, but ill give JDilla a lil more edge over ya, sorry bro.
It's at 3-2 in favor of PPH.... Since the other 2 remaining battles are open until 9 PM tomorrow (5/17) I'm gonna extend this one since it's only a difference of 1 vote right now.
i think j dilla's steady flow throughout took it for me in this one. punch-wise Puff edged a little, multis was pretty much a tie, maybe edged a lil toward j.. neither verse had any lines that made me go DAMN THATS HOT so the flow tipped it in j's direction +1 j dilla
PERSONALS - PuffPuff MULTI'S - PuffPuff/Dilla CREATIVITY - PuffPuff when i read JDilla verse i knew how it flowed immediately, but with Puff it was a little harder to pick up on, but they both had plenty of multis. puff was much more creative tho. +1PuffPuffHOLD
PUNCHES - they both had punches but i would give it to puff for getting personal. NAME PLAY - neither, i dont think they realize name play, is playing with it not just saying it. WORD PLAY - ill give it puff PERSONALS - puff deff had more personal punches FLOW - jdilla had this flow i picked up and didnt expect towards the end, real caught me off guard. MULTI'S - they both had them but puff had more towards the end, ORIGINALITY- neither were to original +1 puff
