Each person will have 36 hours to check in, once both have checked in there will be a 24 hour window to post your verses. Remember the rules, 16 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours before a winner is decided. When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above. UpFromTheSkies yo coalman.. im about get sadistic in this bitch.. sew stitches in your lips leave divots in your fists and make you picture a vivid image of slit wrists im on some cyclical sick spit, warning: flow danger.. ima prove that this coal kid aint got low danglers i'll take an axe to your skull, open the dome chamber and turn this battle into a "no brainer!" im no stranger to first degree murder sprees, i burn emcees to death and diagnose urn disease your shit's weak, absurdities.. hospitals hit peak emergency hours when i get sleek and serpently ima sick breed of hercules.. heroic and evil.. coalman thinks hes an artist? i'll get this poet an easel so he can show he's the deal, the dopest you feel but im pretty sure you gon' choke bitch for real! shit.. i'll even get you the rope fit to seal! my flow rip through steel.. you n me we aint even close-ish to equal no hope for a sequel, im closin the deal, and rippin your soul out your body so it's surreal i keeps the dro lit, my stilo..fuck the karma police i'll mow anyone down yo im armed to the teeth scar up n beast you, i turn hard suckers weak fool, i'll finish the verse n leave you barred up then peace too hold your part up and speak dude.. i wanna hear what you have to say before you get cast away n cry as your mask decays, master slave relationship, you do as i ask or pay.. put the pen down n forfeit! i KNEW theres a faster way! you losin was facts at play.. yeah im so hateful it's chilling.. leave your body bleedin on the floor create a lake in the ceiling of the floor below me now neighbors are billing.. dont matter though, my job is to battle and im "makin a killing coalman23 Stop this nonsense, I'm about to drop the bomb next claiming that you come from the skies, you're very dumb in my eyes i wanna tell you're daddy that his stupid son is despised You from up in the skies, well i'm the best out here I'll jizz on ur face, i cum from the exosphere I gotta phd in medical atrosity, you cant stop my verbal velocity you aint even as hot as me, it's been said in this rap that i can bet that ur whack, ill shove you through jabba the hut's intestinal tract My skill is very factual, my flow is mathematical, my rhymes are acrobatical ur scheme is barely practical, my shit is on point so you can call me supernatural Actin like you rappin nice, ur verse was so whack I almost grabbed a hatchet twice VOTING RULES Voting should also be based upon... PUNCHES NAME PLAY WORD PLAY PERSONALS FLOW MULTI'S ORIGINALITY In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either.. UpFromTheSkies - 5 coalman23 - 0
yo coalman.. im about get sadistic in this bitch.. sew stitches in your lips leave divots it your fists and make you picture a vivid image of slit wrists im on some cyclical sick spit, warning: flow danger.. ima prove that this coal kid aint got low danglers i'll take an axe to your skull, open the dome chamber and turn this battle into a "no brainer!" im no stranger to first degree murder sprees, i burn emcees to death and diagnose urn disease your shit's weak, absurdities.. hospitals hit peak emergency hours when i get sleek and serpently ima sick breed of hercules.. heroic and evil.. coalman thinks hes an artist? i'll get this poet an easel so he can show he's the deal, the dopest you feel but im pretty sure you gon' choke bitch for real! shit.. i'll even get you the rope fit to seal! my flow rip through steel.. you n me we aint even close-ish to equal no hope for a sequel, im closin the deal, and rippin your soul out your body so it's surreal i keeps the dro lit, my stilo..fuck the karma police i'll mow anyone down yo im armed to the teeth scar up n beast you, i turn hard suckers weak fool, i'll finish the verse n leave you barred up then peace too hold your part up and speak dude.. i wanna hear what you have to say before you get cast away n cry as your mask decays, master slave relationship, you do as i ask or pay.. put the pen down n forfeit! i KNEW theres a faster way! you losin was facts at play.. yeah im so hateful it's chilling.. leave your body bleedin on the floor create a lake in the ceiling of the floor below me now neighbors are billing.. dont matter though, my job is to battle and im "makin a killing!" kinda just went with it.. self-hyped a lot but i had fun with itlol
coalman get in here and drop yo bars son! i didnt write that wall of illness for nothin i really hope i dont get another first round freebie again.. that shits weak and yo berry if you can, edit that "divots it your fists" part of my verse to "IN your fists".. rather not have any confusion over a non-sequential lyric feel me?
Yeah, it's retarded, at this rate we could have 3 people advancing by simply checking in, and you could advance just for dropping a 16
yeah just give him til he's holdin up the round from ending.. lol COALMAN gimme somethin to work with cmon! he was last online at like 9 last night.. ima PM him
HOLY SHIT. I WROTE MY WHOLE VERSE, POSTED IT, AND THE FUCKING THING "TIMED OUT" OR SOME SHIT LIKE THAT. YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME. I'll try and throw some shit together, but I'm sober and pissed. Shit's gunna be whack as fuck.
Stop this nonsense, I'm about to drop the bomb next claiming that you come from the skies, you're very dumb in my eyes i wanna tell you're daddy that his stupid son is despised You from up in the skies, well i'm the best out here I'll jizz on ur face, i cum from the exosphere I gotta phd in medical atrosity, you cant stop my verbal velocity you aint even as hot as me, it's been said in this rap that i can bet that ur whack, ill shove you through jabba the hut's intestinal tract My skill is very factual, my flow is mathematical, my rhymes are acrobatical ur scheme is barely practical, my shit is on point so you can call me supernatural Actin like you rappin nice, ur verse was so whack I almost grabbed a hatchet twice EDIT: I know, not 16, but honestly i'm in the shittiest mood haha. And i'm really mad my original wouldn't post.
I read skies when he posted and your now..that why im voting so fast, but.. Skies had a lot of self hype but he still had them punches and flow. coalman you had self hype to and punches but they didn't do it for me. +1 Skies
Generally this forum does do that from time to time...if you would have gone back a page or 2 and hit 'resend' it actually would have saved it temporarily and you could have resubmitted it, lol. But my vote also goes to Skies, more original and had better punches. Like stated above, both were more of a self-hype kinda deal, but Skies was definitely more creative, took the word play category by storm. Sorry coal, but it was kinda clear cut +1 UpFromTheSkies
damn skies, no mercy or what? hahah but shit was ill some redicilous brutality from skies but coalmen did have some nice punches, but skies had this from me from the beginning