Anyways me and mary jane were chillen earlier and makin music together, and i wanted to post some of it to hear what my stoner buddies think. Two songs i would really like some feedback on : Myrok Rolles - Retro Brigade - SoundCloud & Myrok Rolles - Maya Turn It Like This - SoundCloud I would love to know what you guys think. Maybe what i should change / add. Or just how you feel about it in general. Peace and Love Thanks for the listen
guitar part in the first one made me want to skip the rest of the song. the bass line at 2:43 is fucking sick though. maybe work on incorperating the synth line at 3:37 into the part before so its more of a fade out than a hard switch. the second one the "my turn part" from 1:00 to 1:30 reminds me of seegulls from finding nemo. not a good thing. also at 3:17 i dunno if it was just my speakers, but i think that beat could be dropped alot harder. maybe a solid bass line for the first pattern then work in the wobble? I have absolutely no idea what it takes to make a song so this shit might sound retarded to you. its just some straight up opinion for ya. props though man. i had no problem listening to those a couple of times through.
haha ohh man i totally know what ur saying about the finding nemo shit. These were just a couple experiments so i appreciate your input. I'll definitely take all that into consideration on my next one. Like i said, these are both just experiments, they will probably wind up in the trash. But one day i'll have a sick ass CD out..... hopefully....
haha thanks man, i'll try to keep gettin better. @mind voyage: I knowww its not brootal enough , but i wasn't really goin for brootal... but maybe i should? yes... i think i will try brootal one of these times. I never know what its going to turn out like, which is the beauty of it imo