any and all guitar players please take a listen

Great sound you got, dig the distortion/overdrive...

I gotta say I'm extremely biased towards jazz so I didn't really dig any of melodies/chord progressions, it's too rock/pop for me..

But as for your playing skills, work on the timing more... try tapping with your feet because you got off a lot and I was counting along and had to slow down/speed up a lot.

Also IMO the solo was really...well not bad but I just wasn't feeling it at all, the melody and note placement(also way too much bending for me on that high note) it kinda hurt my ears a little bit... I guess I'll just say try coming up with a solo very slowly and try and add more variety to it, and really listen to the notes you are choosing. It almost sounds like you are playing out of a guitar riff book, it needs to sound more natural....

Work a bit more on playing in key, aka if you play C major you shouldn't throw in too many black notes or it will clash too much with the chords. Your chord progressions were all in a certain key and you kept throwing out of key notes, which will only work if you change your chord progression or use these notes VERY VERY lightly...

I guess I can't really say much else because I just prefer a different style of music.... but definitely work on your timing more, you have a lot of potential and a nice guitar / amp sound.

Sorry if i'm too critical, like I said i'm super biased towards jazz.