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A rap while high #2

Discussion in 'General' started by THCeeds, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. #1 THCeeds, Aug 8, 2006
    decided to give it another try... seems as if i can ryhme things easiyer when baked off my mind =DD :smoking::smoking:

    my life was made on a foundation of lies
    this cycle im in is growth like maggots to flys
    the first day with wings,..they live and they die
    i get to my feet and then drop on a dime.
    every time i tell the truth its a lie in its eyes
    so where in time do i start new chapters in life
    keep playing the game cause size and length of success is based on the dice
    so i just keep rollin hopin for a change in my life
    the only thing with non-fiction is the thoughts in my mind
    im sicka proven myself, cuz its a waist of fucking time
    so i give up communication and i show it through rhymes
    my pen talks to the paper cause it dont have to lie
    it dont have to take sides, it dont thrive to be shined
    or use blindness to hide
    But twenty-twenty vision still lacks to show that i try.
    Weather you believe me or not,that a choice thats not myne
    but whatever the sign,im fine with whatever choice you decide.


    ok i made sure this one wasent to long like my other one lol

    blaze on :D


    sorry if it made your eyes bleed but i hade to try again
     
  2. #2 THCeeds, Aug 9, 2006
    32 veiws but no replys :(
     
  3. #3 kRaZy tOkA IVXX, Aug 9, 2006
    only reason i dont think people replied is bcuz by just reading lyrics u cant get the flow u had in ur head to flow for them because there just reading it..
     
  4. #4 motion, Aug 9, 2006
    Damn bro. I'm really digging that. Keep at it for sure. +rep
     
  5. #5 THCeeds, Aug 9, 2006
    thanks motion glade you liked it! =PP
     
  6. #6 dontwasteit, Aug 9, 2006
    I got the flow of it,even thought I dont listen to much rap(Only 2 rap songs on my mp3 player are Hit em up and Dance with the devil(Fucked up but its got a meaning). That was really good,especially for being baked.
     
  7. #7 THCeeds, Aug 30, 2006
    well thanks.. but it actully seems easyer for me to rap while im baked... rather then sober
     
  8. #8 NealCaffery, Aug 30, 2006
    Pretty good man, +rep to that shiz.
     
  9. #9 ReeferMadness69, Aug 30, 2006
    thats the shit. im sober as the war on terruh but thats ok/ were approaching a new era its calleed get the fuck out my way/ we all do our own thing and dont give a fuck/ pretty damn soon our nations goin to errupt/ thanks to the bush administration and the people behind him/ we cant do shit but makes rhymes askin why him? make anybody president donald duck or mickey mouse cuz anyone one of those fuckers can do a better job representin the white house/
     
  10. #10 THCeeds, Aug 30, 2006
    ha thanks a whole ton guys i appericate tha comments.... keeps me motivated to write more
     
  11. #11 THCeeds, Aug 30, 2006
    that was pretty fly reefer... i realy liked it +rep on yours also ;)
     
  12. #12 theHit, Aug 30, 2006
    i liked the verse.....but work on your multis (a.k.a. multi-syllabic rhymes)....it'll definitely help with the flow too...
     
  13. #13 ReeferMadness69, Aug 30, 2006
    thanks man. urs was chill too. kinda deep. i dig deep flows
     
  14. #14 cannabis, Aug 30, 2006
    Thats a deep verse right there
    I like intellectual flows like yours, some straight nas shit

    keep it up
     
  15. #15 Ktwizzy, Aug 30, 2006
    Not alot of people like rap where the rapper rhymes simple words like:

    eyes with thighs
    time with rhyme

    ya know what im sayin.
     
  16. #16 Bliz-NATI, Aug 30, 2006
    Im pretty sure i heard the beat in my head. nice bro.
     
  17. #17 ReeferMadness69, Aug 30, 2006
    do u have a point?
     
  18. #18 ReeferMadness69, Sep 1, 2006
    wuuut i dont fuckin remember saying that lol. hey my bad dude that was rude of me.
     

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