ten are the hours i've slept this week nine are the syllables you need to speak eight are the times i've made them proud seven is the number i've smoked just now six are the dreams i hold in my heart five are the ones i'm about to part four are the strings on my crippled guitar three are the times i've dented my car two are the stars I saw above once is the chance you get at love but now i sit still silent thinking that all of my dreams have caused my sinking but still, like william's, my heart leaps up as I behold a rainbow standing in the stretched face of the old a delicate dream is it worth my spending or am I just wasting counting unexisting time
dude you write that yourself??? Not bad at all very interesting The only thing I would change is the 3 times you dented your car hahah. But other than that fucking excellent
yeah, i wrote it. thanks for reading. i know that car line sounds clumsy, but that's the way things are.