http://youtu.be/ieaMdeoMSeM Listen to this beat if you need it while reading it (I wrote it without a beat) Uhhhh yeah Times passing 4:19 one minute away 420 nigga until the end of my days A stoner, west side born and raised Now start to get the bowl packed, lets blaze Bong rip so hard calling it the smoke stack California man, where the dank is grown at Shits no mystery, that schwag is history Everyone want it when I'm packing the chronic but here everyones happy with calling the green So everyone pull out your bic, grab that herb Get yo piece and flick a flame that you deserve Because when your high your at peace with earth. Please rate it 1-5. I appreciate critics, but please tell me whats wrong with it, not just saying it sucks.
Hey Hey Man! Walkin down the beach, I Think, bout the place ive reached, bout the home ive found, love the waves crashin sound, plop my ass in the sand on the ground, bring my hash pen to face! Take a dab to make them stoners proud! Yeah! Throw the ball down the beach, watch my dog, reach, before i can blink, I feel my feet, Have left the ground, I love the life ive found! I really liked that beat lol good choice my man! Gunna keep writing with this one ill post a rap over the beat later lol
This is a rhyme i did called "Hesitation" Yo Yo Ayo Check it Check it Uh yeah Check it check it what? what? Im going in Im going in What? What? ayo check it check it uh yeah one two one two one two one two
not that great id say a 3...i listen to potluck though and thats their main style https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYvPNrKTvJQ
uhh just pulled up in my coupe no top bout to buy some moccasins, tags gunna pop corner store robed by the mail mans mom no fears when they see me enter like cheech and chong this right here is the end of my song not yet high where'd i put my bong