I wrote this poem after my girlfriend broke up with me. i gave it to her and she cried lol. tell me what you think. A Love Like Ours What would you call a love like ours Would you say its like a fairy tale A hundred pages of your compiled lies A book that's a hundred pages too long Where at the end our hero dies And there's a darkness but no dawn Or would you say its like a song Cause I know you love to sing About how you left me high and dry And brought that love of ours to a screeching halt Because I couldn't take one more lie And am I to believe its all my fault Well listen Hun, it just so turns out A love like ours isn't love at all It's a sugar coated tragedy. And while your notes said “always love†I guess I missed the fine print Because it wasn't ‘till our last goodbyes That I picked up on your hint A love like ours isn't real
Wow. You got some real talent. I enjoyed that and I totally felt the emotions streaming through the words. I bet she cried, it conveyed some powerful emotions in a few paragraphs. Great job. You really captured the essence.