A few poems

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Doobamatic, Feb 22, 2009.

  1. Just some stuff I wrote in my spare time.
    Any constructive criticism is happily accepted.
    Cheers!:smoking:



    It all begins...

    The shroud of Doubt
    The Echo of hope
    Past skin
    Past muscle
    Deeper
    to the inner confines
    of
    your
    being.
    It is there
    where your inspiration
    is born
    nurtured
    and constructed.

    The inner workings of a mind
    used in vein
    null
    But if you can
    harness your mind and
    heart,

    it will all begin to make sense.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


    Patience and virtue
    seep through these walls
    Everlasting opportunity
    to take the stage
    and show everyone
    the knowledge
    you posses.
    But be original and consistent
    for a mind useful mind
    these days
    is
    a
    diamond
    in
    the
    rough.
     
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