a challenge

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by junkiemonkie111, Jan 5, 2011.

  1. Write the first 250 words of a short story, but write them in ONE SENTENCE. Make sure that the sentence is grammatically correct and punctuated correctly.


    here's mine:

    There was a boy who had no memories, nor concept of time, who lived in a village in a small island in the middle of the great pacific ocean living in a hut with his family, who try their best to raise him as best as they can, though he never remembers who they are, every second, minute, hour, all day, everyday, since he was born, on that one peculiar rainy day, when all the kids were outside letting the rain wash their troubles away, while their parents watch from afar the best gift that God gave them, out of all the things they have, the island overflowing with life from trees and vegetation, that most people on the island grew in a large acre of land they all shared to grow their crops, that's always plentiful and never withers away, with the weather on their side, the warmth of the sun motivating them every morning, and the moon watching over them when they sleep at night, where not one person is afraid of anything because everyone trusts each other and everyone is in tune with each other's thoughts and feelings, except the little boy with no memories, nor concept of time, who lived day to day as a mere wanderer in this strange world of his, where every moment is brand new to him, everyday is an adventure, and everyday is a psychedelic high, as he sees each moment through newborn eyes, with no concept of the future either, until he solves the puzzle hidden inside of him.

    ......im so fucking high:cool:

     
  2. That's run on man.....
     
  3. I think you lost man. :p
     

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