Thank U HIP-HOP (Sorry Ms Jackson Remix)

Thank U HIP-HOP, D-Dermz 2011 FREE D/L by ddermz on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

This is my new joint! This that real hip hop ya feel me. If u happen to have a soundcloud account make sure to leave a comment ya dig.










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Thank U HIP-HOP FREE DOWNLOAD 2011


yeah yall you already know, I'm MVP Semi Pro
Rookie of the year heads up like a penny yo
You never seen nothing like this before
Old school still play Nintendo 64
Ima cool cat, sorta like a calico
All eyez on me like a motherfuckin talent show
Blood sweat and tears i probably spilled a gallon yo
Dominate the game when i crush it wit a violent blow
My lyrical is so strategic, MCs cnt believe it
Everybody wanna know whats my secret
The way I piece it together like adhesive
And how my style move crowda like telekinesis
I'm Mike with the offense, Muhammad with the defense
Been fuckin up the beat since, ill turn u into meat mince
And you already know I run the game check my feet prints
Styles change frequent like DNA sequence
The flow illy im so silly i know really
But at the same its so cold and chilly
21 years old and guility
Of treatin Hip Hop like a ho thats filthy,so forgive me
I'm Raps supporter
I'm sorry Hip Hop for treatin u like ms jacksons daughter
its time to put things back in order,
I love u u the reason every track i slaughter
If it wasnt for u idk how id been brought up
But i wouldnt be me for starters
And i wouldnt be as nearly conscious
Thank you Hip Hop for these yearly conflicts
Nobody wanna see me progress
Thank u for ya love and not that tv nonsense
Thank you for the strength u gave me
Look at me, look at the length you made me
Its crazy im sorry if i hurt u
or talk too much about that purple
Hip Hop its love is universal
A blessing from the Mericful


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Edited by The MC, 14 December 2011 - 05:27 PM.

I listened to it twice. It didn't really move me, but I have high expectations of that sound. I think your phrasing is mediocre though some of your choice in words was interesting. Your timing is fair, though sometimes you can hear what sounds like strain to hit the right bench marks tempo wise. Back away from the microphone. Not like stop rappin' like physically take it away from your mouth. You can hear your breath hit the mic several times.

Obv. wasnt recorded professionally , I did this myself with what i got. THATS HIP HOP!

Listen to it again without high expectations. Just enjoy. Tell me what u think of the flow and how it sounds compared to rappers nowadays.

I did that. That's why I listened the second time.

Well ok thanks for listening. What kind of rappers do u usually listen to?

This track isa banga!!!!!!! Yall gotta feel this!! Come clean and keep it real if ya like the sound

Edited by The MC, 14 December 2011 - 05:29 PM.

keep it up but try MCing on an original beat, not an outstanding outkast song cuz then you're just gonna get compared to the original.

felt the first half of it, not bad man

I like a lot of different kinds. I go way back to the beginning. I've liked Atmosphere and Kid Cudi lately. I liked the Beatnuts, Fiasco, most anyone from the 36 chambers, Hell I don't know. I don't like most of what lil wayne is on about and taylor game is in pretty much the same boat. I can't wait for an MC to come out and spit some real science like back in the day. Something fun, smart, aware, and danceable. I mean don't get me wrong I can teach you how to dougie. . .but it just feels like somethings missing these days. Kids try and compare Lil wayne to KRS-ONE like they have even heard more than two things he spit.

That shit made sense. Sound good to me.

this was actually kinda dope for what it is only one complaint, the beat is too low raise it up!