opening my own business

first thing that i've noticed just opening the link(i'll add more to the list as i find them)
I like your overall design and color scheme as well as the font(s) you chose, it works well together.

needs to be a space between featuring & artists in the first paragraph

as i followed the link for "100's of glass pipes" i noticed the main site title/header overlaps the page header
also on this page i think it would be nice if maybe you had a pic of your fav. piece on each of the dollar amounts(i.e. $20 and under, $25 and under...)
and just a personal thought, i think it would look more professional if you were to change the "100's" into " Hundred's" the text just seems more professional like you are willing to take the time to type out the whole word
also, I'm not sure what the skinny white box is for at the bottom of your price selection page when following the same link.

it looks like the header overlapping the page title is showing up on pretty much all of the other pages as well...

i like one of the zong's you have on there a lot, and if it were glass on glass i might consider a purchase, also wasn't quite sure if you worked with cash in any way?

daily 4:20 sale... genius!
i also like the gift certificate idea.

overall it looks like a solid site, just fixed that which is in need of fixing and finish whatever isn't, good luck with your buisness man!

 

i feel its the same as every other template, nothing really original about it. makes it looks less professional.

don't be offended, thats just how i think. =(


edit: but the name is cool.

 

First impression, I'm very impressed at how professional it looks.

You will be putting a basic description for them right? Height, type of glass, etc?

Biggest thing is getting it out there! I think you could have a good business here. Hope all goes well.

I will be sure to "stop by" when you open

 

If you are planning on getting organic traffic from search engines by using search engine optimization on your website, you should really read a guide on how to SEO your website.

Just for a few examples :

Your title :

is way to long, 5-6 words is plenty, the shorter and more concise the better.
"The Stealthy Smoker" being first in the title, get that out of there.

What keywords are you focusing on? I doubt anyone really searches for sherloks, so get those extra keywords watering down your title out.

Premium herb grinders, rolling machins, etc, get all of that out of the title of the homepage.

You only want to target 2-3 keywords per page, and instead make a separate subpage for rolling machines, and put it in the title there.




Look on google and look at what other people in your niche are doing that are already in the top 10 on google, they are doing something right, learn from it.


edit : as for the design and aesthetic feel, I think it looks great.

The most important thing when it comes to the internet, is ranking on the top of the search engines and get tons of free organic and targeted traffic.

 

the underlined headers to every topic on the front page look weird ... Make them stand out more and get rid of the underline!

 

I like it, I just think its kinda odd how you set up your buttons on there under Glass Pipes on the left hand side.

bubblers (are they also glass pipes)
gandolfs and sherlocks ( maybe "dry pipes" might be more appropriate idk if a lot of people know what they are off the bat)
Screens and Sliders (accessories maybe?)

The only reason I mention the interface is because some websites do make it really annoying to just browse pipes because of all the different categories, try to make it all interconnected almost and on the same level. Kinda like below

Wet Pipes
Dry Pipes
Pipe Accessories
ect..

Im just being picky though, its a nice site, and I really love your 4:20 deal thing, but I missed it the first few times I saw the home page, maybe make it more noticeable. But yea, keep that Idea because if you put good deals on there, and not just 5% off here and there, you will get daily customers looking to buy pipes.....just look at websites like woot and other daily deals, people catch on quick to those if you put up good products at good prices.


And are you selling animals and critters....or animal shaped pipes?

 

I am pming you.

 

nice! I like it, its much better

 

I thot you did a really good job with the cite. lol i was expecting an ammature website - but yours looks legit. I like the design a lot. it's clean and classy and I like how it is organized.

However, I would make the background color more psychodelicish... after all, this is a site designed for stoners and I would appreciate going onto a site that is not only easy to navigate but visually intersting. Add some flavor to it! Make your logo better - then if your business gets big enough, you could also have shirts. BUTT if you have shits make sure theyre sick!

Also to get your business started, if you live by the beach or something, you could sell the shirts and with the purchase give out discount coupons to your site. Create customers!

But overall, try to make your business stand out more. So far your site looks like one among many. What makes you special?? What about you grabs people??

 

i noticed when i go to why buy from us, theres nothing there, you should put something there lol

 

also the wording for your site description(part right under the title, bold and white) seems a little awkward, mainly because "many, many smoker accesories" doesn't seem to flow too well, and i agree that some of the things don't need to be in that description.