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Sassy's Poetry


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SassyMelassy

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Wow that was genius:eek:

I like how down-to-earth the language is. Reminds me of simpler times
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"Taut parchment
skin stretches over
my hollow frame and
my heart dances
just to take up space."


you are gifted! i love it (:
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haha you wrote these a while back, so itll be like we know what was going through your mind back then.

theyre great btw :metal:

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Sorry I'm insanely baked and tired and only got through reading about 4, but what I've read was really interesting, I'm gonna subscribe and come back. You've got great command of lyrical phrasing and words. Really nice stuff.:)

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You should really start writing again. Some of the best stuff I've ever read.
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Some of these are actually really good. And I don't like anything.

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Sassy... By everything I've seen in my years, fewer than most they may be, that truly had my heart. Held between the words, your empty spaces places to lay my soul. Imagery abounding around and between, the thoughts inspired within... me.

Absolutely beautiful, you say if anyone cares. I write this for you, in case you wanted to hear my head. You had a gift, have a gift, sharpened in daylight and tempered by night. The heart pouring over, filling in the literary delight.

Wonderful poetry... Brings forth the burning in my soul.
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These are great! My humanities class is focusing on poetry right now and you have given me some great ideas and motivation.
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You poured your heart & soul out, and it was beautiful. Please share some more of your poetry in the poetry thread, or here if you do so please.

+subscribe

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All good things perpetuate themselves if need be. I truly hope you return one day. Some point in the future (or the non-linear past) you will find your words and the hope inscribed upon them will propel you forward.
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I freaking loooove 'rejection' dude.

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:love:

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Glad you checked me out.
Thank you!
:)

Heh... ;) :smoke:




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