Official Poetry Thread

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by See Emily Play, Mar 17, 2010.

  1. #1801 Deleted member 281310, Sep 12, 2015
    Last edited: Sep 12, 2015
    this was beautifully written and relatable
     
  2. Thank you. I really appreciate the feedback.
     
  3. Thanks I appreciate it. I always like feedback on what I write, especially from people I don't know because I'm better at dealing with the honesty.
     
  4. The name of my poem is
    FUCK THE LIQUOR COMPANIES

    Fuck the liquor companies you robbers of souls
    You're the reason legalized weed can't be smoked in bowls
    Fuck the liquor companies you slayers of the liver
    Can't let us have the gentle high that weed will deliver
    Fuck the liquor companies you killers of drivers
    Don't make available a better way to get higher
    Fuck the liquor companies you twisters of the mind
    If marijuana were legal your sales would fall behind
    Fuck the liquor companies your advertisements and sales
    You're the reason marijuana fields are burned by the bales
    Fuck the liquor companies and the families you're robbing
    How much money have you spent on political lobbying
    Fuck the liquor companies for all the holidays they've trashed
    While police raid houses who have a little weed stashed
    Fuck the liquor companies for what you sell is addiction
    Knowing damn well with weed there is no such affliction
    Fuck the liquor companies you know prohibition didn't work
    You want all the money and won't have a competitor lurk
    Fuck the liquor companies and their gift boxed sets
    A gift of gentle ganja is a gift we'll never get
    Fuck the liquor companies and the power they hail
    While petty pot criminals overflow all local jails
    Fuck the liquor companies portraying sex and wealth
    Your product is a toxin and you don't care about our health
    Fuck the liquor companies and think of this if you might
    Have you ever seen anyone smoke weed and then get into a fight?
     
  5. Really good! And sad
     
  6. Froosh225, that "Really good! And sad was for you! Sorry, still learning g my way around on here
     
  7. #1807 Deleted member 281310, Oct 18, 2015
    Last edited: Oct 19, 2015
    Mornin' Chance


    The heart flutters like the wings of a hummingbird,
    mockingbird or mocking-jay.
    I need the nourishment so I pick up the weed, the word
    and quickly light up a j.
    A morning routine to cover up the nerves
    voice loud, chest puffed, wings loud,
    while the flight is on lock down.
    Pop a script not the scripture
    dozing off to the mixture
    dosing off the night before
    the beat flew me cross a humble round of pitchers.
    Morning vent got me showing y'all the pictures
    and no matter what I write my own scripture.
    Momentum got me up off the bed with a hop to my step
    tap tap tap feeling on my chest.
    For the sun to beam down and show me boundaries
    is like the neighborhood dog telling me to do my laundry.
    I laugh it off as quick as it comes
    but when the sun is down and the dawn plums
    that dog is a god tryna turn me into a drum.

    The moon falls down in crescent descent;
    a cradle for my shambled mess of a head.
    Walking about wandering and wondering,
    an end of a day before it even began.
    I plucked the strings of a fellow friend
    for an hours time till those fingers cried.
    And a blue island severed my inhibition again
    to do what's mandatory on an abandoned mission.
    Nights like these I stumble over to the pier
    and pray for my cradle to turn into a full steer,
    so my fluttering kicks starts the engine of the dead
    above oceans lilting line foaming pitch of dark
    I flow out the night sky with my first head.
    Mesmerized by city hues and remaining galactic clues.
    Timeless as the work I make watching the lonely stark sea
    with glimmers of trade ships just across the black horizon
    our son shines my morning into the oceans north star plea
    to be found and heard from a girl to birth, I play my silence.
     
  8. Was just looking through my old poems, and thought I'd throw up one I was reminded of when an old friend contacted me last night.


    Another cold and cloudy day
    The whole sky is covered in gray
    It's hard to move or try to think
    So from the kitchen I grab a drink
    I look at my phone, which is still dead
    No incoming calls to lift it's head
    I sit in my room to kill 6 hours
    Awake for 8, and my tongue still cowers
    No one to listen so no reason to speak
    All of a sudden my eyes start to leak
    Then out of nowhere, my phone starts to ring
    Old friends placed aside the petty things
    At the same time, the clouds start to clear
    And dissipate, just like my fears
     
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  9. Auto-Biography




    Why do you itch
    self-destruction?
    Goosebumps rising
    names you wish you could abandon
    in the recesses of
    your angry past


    Transgressions against
    yourself aren't always
    as clear as you're
    told they are
    emotional masochism
    coursing virulent
    through half-drunk veins


    Playing childhood games
    fragile daydreams
    turned nightmares because
    you'd rather hoard
    those pills an insurance policy
    for the “maybes” in your mind


    So one decade
    slips into the next
    and you slip
    in and out
    of varying states
    of your own
    tainted consciousness
     
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  10. The broken gas mask
    That masked my first and last pass
    Passed
    Extremely exposed to the toxic ghost
    I'd like the most
    of what I can find


    In midst of the mist, the list
    is short
    But it's all I can kiss
    Despite the shit and piss
    Environmentally infused to create missed
    Targets who refuse grace


    Fumes zoom with a loom
    -ing hate, shake, and rape parade as one
    The bruise on her body can't be undone
    It's losing nature won't be overcome


    A suffocating list
    dotted with
    Beauty and love
    Grace and his stuff
    Mercy and sharing
    No judgement
    No staring


    Pairing my list
    With an otherworldly hope
    The suffocation dies
    If I keep it up close


    **** I'm still new to this whole writing thing so it's a very sloppy and erratic poem. I kinda like it though!


     
  11. I wrote this poem while eating food with my family (who is African American). Some Old White Lady was giving us some pretty nasty glares every time we laughed or smiled.


    I can feel your judging nature
    Your eyes placid and outrageous
    You're sickened by the phases
    That the youth go through these days
    Enraged by common sense
    And medicine to keep the lips zipped
    Your comfortable

    You're satisfied
    You've gone to church, rectified
    Suucide seems like a cop out
    Culture seems like a dry drought
    So you take and take and own
    And grab lands and call them home
    Because they're comfortable

    You're precise in your actions
    Articulate in your moves
    Tamed by the beatitudes
    And taught to praise your pagan god
    Like we're suppose to
    Because it's comfortable

    You don't utter regrets
    You've got opportunities and chances
    Mild finances don't bother you much
    You got green fingers and
    Accented desires that mimic
    The Fire that's been burning
    Since the moment your people began burning
    Whatever is primal or doesn't make
    You feel comfortable


    You're so conflicted
    It troubling seeing your worries
    Spilled out over epitaphs and words
    That hurt everyone but you the most
    For the host has to live
    With whatever they grow
    To make them comfortable

    I can see your influence
    I can see you're influenced by your influence
    I can see you're sick and tired
    But you fight and shove
    Your horse into whatever stable seems fit
    To find some kind of peace or reverence
    To find something comfortable

    It weighs on you
    You're held responsible for shit you didn't do
    Whatever's true matters only to you
    It doesn't matter to the boys in blue
    Or the ones in red
    That'd take a life instead
    Because you're very presence
    Makes every ebony essence
    Feel uncomfortable

    You're not comfortable
    None of us are and your
    Direct rhetoric darting from your eyes
    That stare so blankly that I can't help
    But to stare and lose my self
    Cause you're scared and I get it
    And I wish I could take it all away
    And feel comfortable
     
  12. That was a really dope poem man.
     
  13. Yea well this isn't going to be the greatest shit you've read but u must be bored...

    Pull the trigger &wash the pain down with some liquor. this love was so sweet but now it tastes bitter. My wounds were never takn care of I'm infected like a nasty blister. I'm sniffn somethin that gets my nose burnin, Rub me the right way & u got me yearnin. Looking for u Romeo you have this potion. You rock me the right way even though our boat no longer floatin.

    The way u scream at me it itches, It wakes up the pain, it triggers my anger widgets. Taking hits while I figget. Don't worry ill be fine once I finish, just give me a minute.
    In the meantime u need to realize, what u do to me makes my life feel finalized.
    My mind is traumatized, all fucking dead inside. My heart beats but I'm not alive.
    I live evil i feel it at my finger tips. & yes that shit is flipped but not everybody see's it. My screams are silenced because your hands cover my lips. Your smiling while I suffocate, why do i kiss you, why do I love your hate
     
  14. short narrative poem I wrote up :smoke:


    Rising above the limitless plains I see it,
    Clouds a little over, burdened by the rain.
    So I am saddened by what I understand remains unlit.
    Heart to hearth, and hearth to heart, to heart to heart...
    Fireplace like truths waiting unused, to be bright and burned;
    Free and frozen, famous frauds framed me as a freak.
    For those I love, well trodden paths appear hidden amongst the ferns.


    Finding myself the hero, brandishing torch, illuminating tirelessly.
    Courage from those I knew, fleeting glimpses of what is sacred,

    Courage for the unsung mystics, shouting clues to give in to...the sacred.
    Holiness appearing to those ill suited to the task ahead, letting you know.
    You appear to me like six thousand candles under the moonlight;
    Incandescent through and through, nowhere blind to what is aglow.
    Immovable tower, delectable insights into what makes midnight,
    Realizing the lonesome cries of the Coyote , so far, so far from you.


     
  15. Hopped up out the beddd
    Turn my stove onnn

    Took a look in the fridge like
    Whats up?!

    Yeahhhhh, bacon & eggssss
    Toasssst
     
  16. Kill me fucking kill me.

    Dreams squandered . Time wasted.

    Kill me fucking kill me

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  17. #1817 Kushmedic, Feb 6, 2016
    Last edited by a moderator: Feb 6, 2016
    For Shari III

    Awaken to find yourself
    aboard a vessel-
    a grand sloop-
    an enourmous, gallant being
    made by the tiniest of things.
    You are its sole occupant.
    Because it lives,
    it keeps you
    safely within...
    warmed from cold,
    sheltered from storm,
    protected from embattlement,
    and loved from loneliness.

    Broad as the sky is wide,
    its hull battered,
    weathered, though strong
    maintains its beauty
    with tall sails billowing forth excitedly
    by the winds of the Sun.
    Bucking gently about at port,
    anxious to be free,
    eager to move,
    impatient to travel,
    its bow aimed
    at some distant point
    beyond the night.
    You wonder its direction.

    Go...

    Release the moorings,
    cast the ties,
    set forth...explore...
    realize your dreams
    and worry not your fate.
    Set afloat and
    entrust the great ship
    with your soul as you
    have freedom by will
    have solace by imagination
    have love by hope
    and let faith
    be your courage.

    Though it knows
    the way,
    the ship begs you...
    invites you...
    to take the wheel
    into your hands,
    to hold fast
    to hold steady
    to hold lovingly
    and to feel its might
    as it slips the bonds
    of worlds,
    dances the beams
    of pulsars,
    and skims the edges
    of black holes.

    Go...

    Fly swift and sure
    upon gossamer wings
    through the great sea
    where rules chaos and calm,
    where the stars are your fane,
    where a pale blue dot
    lays distant in your wake
    and where the future
    stretches out ahead.

    In this endless flight
    that carries you
    through space...
    through time...
    through all that ever was...
    through all that is,
    you find limitless beauty
    as millions of lights wink out
    while millions more are born
    amongst vast clouds
    that glow colorfully,
    magnificently,
    against the silence of the dark
    and witness many wondrous things
    yet to be.

    Go...

    No quest greater
    than this place
    from where you stand
    and the universe,
    a gift to you,
    flows effortlessly around
    because it is commanded
    by that vessel which carries you,
    brought to power by your love...
    my heart.

    Together...

    Journey with me, my love...
    straight away to Orion,
    to the treasure hidden
    within his sword,
    we go vigilantly, bravely...
    never urgent, always calm.
    Seconds hold still for us
    and history fades quckly
    as we make our way
    to a very special place,
    to a beautiful life,
    to where all is anew
    and forever isn't a time...
    it's only the beginning.


    -Michael
     
  18. Now > Then

    Back in the day,
    I was anti-drug you see.
    Now I say,
    "Pass the blunt to me!"
     
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  19. "She held his hand as
    the conductor whistled his habitual
    farewell. A grasp, an attempt at
    slowing the hands of which
    has no bounds.''
     
  20. Just another scar she said. One to add to the collection. The shattered dreams she's had, the burn as the needle pulls from the new injection. She turns and walks away, leaving the scars of the newest rejection. I feel the pain, I don't sense the lack of connection. As it stands we all thrive on these thoughts of perfection.
     

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