Im'a do some quick audios as well since i guess its the trend right now. big ups to everyone doin it so far. lets show love and spread the likes, and also KIND constructive criticism so we can all get better as mc's also, when i post, i apologize about the quality, my boy who i record with is out of town and i wanna put some shit up today, so im using my shitty laptop mic. HOLLA
Preach! Don't worry about the quality, man. Most of us are working with lower quality recording! I'm excited to hear your flow, because your lyrics are great.
^^ I appreciate that fam. There are mad talented people here. As soon as I get a few, i'll record. Its kinda hard because im watching my niece until tomorrow, but i'll def put something up asap. keep killin it peeps!!
Everyone askin me how I'm doing well.... Everything is just fucking fine And the scotch gets me drunker then the red fucking wine In the fucking dead of the night I sit and I write dead fucking rhymes But I decline to show you more then one fucking line coz I know once you read on You'll be fucking inclined to be a shoulder to lean on, true intentions behind to fuck with mind but it already seems gone Leave me playing Evanescences Missing like its my new fucking theme song I gotta keep saying fuck in every line that I'm spraying Coz I keep getting fucked but not the fuck that I'm craving.... All I got so far
[ soundcloud ] https://soundcloud.com/vinny-the-engineer/w-rap-your-meat [ /soundcloud ] I got a stiffy Swinging my wood like Ken Griffey Me and my crew We fucking up the second city Are ya with me? We be pissing on the walls If I'm lucky, find a chick Take her home, drain my balls Did you get the call? I be saving you the pain Open up ya ears, clear ya mind And I'll explain Fucking ain't a game Yeah, it's gonna be some fun In fact, a lot It's a blast, but you're playing with a gun And decisions weigh a ton So you best to pack a jimmy, skinny I know you hanging out with Kimmy That girl's like the flu She gets around inside the city I'd be extra careful when I'm fucking with those titties But the damage is done Now ya cum taste like chum Always rock protection when you loving one and dones Wear it like a glove Get your ass checked for SIDs You shoulda wrapped ya meat, kid Wrap ya meat Lay my pipe like a plumber I'm shooting like a navy gunner She's tweaking out My dick's a stone cold stunner Cause I said so, ho Make her squeal, she's a treble Got the sock on the door Bed rocking hard like death metal I'm afraid to settle But I always know the rules Some of the sex education you receive at your school Is inadequate Preaching guised as teaching speaking only for abstinence Bitch, I laugh at this Not because it's funny, who's the dummy? That thinks this schtick is even close to realistic Just check the analytics Turns out that people like to screw, here's a clue We should probably teach them what to do And if they choose to... Then at least we know it's neat Remind them to be safe and always wrap ya meat Rinse and repeat Stop the spread of HIV and HPV And a fucking laundry list of STDs Wrap ya meat
There's people out there starving Let's end the hunger Governments only exist to suck life out of us like a plunger Everyone is free and nobody has to work for anyone You just read the truth and it then begun
Did another 8 on the same beat as last time. Little better flow on this one https://soundcloud.com/glock-coma-1/another-quick-8 The governments lovin it servin another hit to the fiends in the hood clutch and rip out another scene in the book depleting those demeaning looks watchin police slap handcuffs on another seasoned crook I see they shook, every day we losin thugs cuz when they turn and start to run the 5-0 sparks the gun seizing the largest sums leavin the suburbs alone but they rip apart the slums
I didn't have time to write anything so here's a freestyle: https://soundcloud.com/illwittabic/no-name
Killin it^^ also...im a little too high. can I get a KIND reminder on how the FUCK to embed my soundcloud clips
Once your track is on SoundCloud, go to the home page. Click share. Then copy the link to this forum.
https://soundcloud.com/david-cruz-299/ganinja-dthedaydreamergcbars1 They said I got one chance, so spit the verse of my life so should I spit about the wealth, poppin bottles, dripped in ice? should I rap about the hustle, shit I did to earn my stripes? or should I rap about the struggle, pain and tragic twists of life? should I kick it about the herb, burnin down that Day'N'Night should I let em know the reasons why my soul is cold as ice? should I explain the path that led me down roads dark as Wesley Snipes? or should I let em know my feelings when my brother lost his life? should I talk about poverty, starving children and women? the citizens around the world that live in wretched conditions? people in high positions that make the whole worlds decisions? and how we're lied to everyday, but are blinded to our suspicions? should I make it my mission, to expose fake politicians? inform the masses how media has us trained and conditioned? is this chance my obligation to raise up coalitions? or would any of it matter? would anyone even listen? Good looks Nicka...I always overthink shit. so fuckin simple. haha
https://soundcloud.com/david-cruz-299/ganinja-dthedaydreamer-gcbars2 Ever since i been a youngin, Always about the reaper can't front and say thats its never on my cerebral But the Devil is a liar, he'll try to make ya mind teeter But Now I spit at that nigga, let him know im'a be here I know i'll never be given anymore than I can take And every night before I sleep I pray to God my soul to wake but I swear the day I don't, I just pray jesus don't forsake Cuz I done made mistakes, im not perfect im not a saint I done did my dirty work, stole when I had on my plate but I done been down and out, stuck with nothin on my plate so yeah i've snaked, done some sneaky shit that I regret today but I stand hear to say to death get the fuck out my face Cuz im not even done yet, shit i barely even started I survived that car crash where others woulda been departed looked Grim in his eyes, said fuck you, his face dishartened Man im here for a reason, an I put that on my mom, kid
https://soundcloud.com/13amp/verse-hook-sample-test Test of a chorus and verse...don't have the lyrics typed out yet, but ill come back and post em
Glock and GaNinja, killer tracks, dudes. Keep em coming! Nice to see Amp 13 jumping in, too. Dudes is always killing it.
ill give some feed on the tracks, i don't wanna seem like i think im better then people on here, because its not like that but its clear i been doin' audio a lot longer so i feel i can lend some help...everyone of the posters got bars and i enjoy reading through the thread... so starting from glock comas 8... Glock- the delivery and flow is good, only thing id say is try and open up a bit, the bars sound kinda mechanical, by that i mean emotion, more than just stressin the ends, but i do like that...its kinda hard to feed just 8 bars, but sharpen it up just a tad and youd be a monster, the emotion thing is really just a suggestion than a critique, kuz i like that kinda thing, but others do dig the more "serious" deliveries... Bic- its hard to feed on a free because you don't write anything to like showcase a flow or scheme...the free was nice though, consistent, i like the laid back delivery...i'd really like to hear an actual verse/track from you to showcase your writing skills because we all know you can write parts that just hit beats so perfect...i've peeped 2 free's from you Ganinja-2 acappella verses, the flow is consistent, i can hear you ridin' the flow, if you woulda had a beat it woulda been real dope...maybe try switchin' up the delivery a bit at times, drop the "growl" type voice in spots and what not, i bet that would be real dope, but thats just suggestions really kuz theres nothing wrong with what you dropped... Carl-lol, wrap ya meat, funny lyrics...the flow is dope, you slip up in parts but if you were to do a few more takes that'd get smoothed out...some of the lines come off mechanical, like your focusing on staying on beat more than getting lost in it and ridin it...but then again i donno if thats actually what you're going for, a more 'proper' (as in enunciation of words) sounding delivery, if so, then you hit it and just iron out the flow in spots and it's golden... did i miss anybody?
sorryfor the double post, but the best advice i got when i first started doin audio and makin songs was... you know how in stage plays the actors wear a lot of make up, the reason is so that even the people in the back rows and highest balconies could see their facial expressions better... in music, thats your voice, you gotta add that "make up" which is delivery...you gotta make people hear the emotion, you know how you can tell when someone is happy and smiling through their voice even over the phone? that kinda thing...you gotta stress your voice in the spots you want to hit certain emotions, add the "make up".... that really opened my eyes to delivery
Thanks, Amp! I appreciate the feedback and will def take it to heart. That's a good analogy, too. In terms of my delivery, I'm not sure what I'm going for lol. I just started making beats and lyrics last month so it's a learning process but your feedback will certainly help. Keep on killing it, man!
oh man I hope the audio trend catches on, feel free to follow me on soundcloud, I'll follow back. https://soundcloud.com/iceymusik/sing-about-me I just wanna be remembered, have a stamp on the earth I aint got no prophet, reincarnations or turfs look Here I am, god damn, just talking about my past again Just hoping one day I can break out my own depression I dont think the common man see's how serious I am keep 6 shots on my hip, tac knife with a grip (down toned) Every single day I wake up feeling all kinds of shit Wondering what new drugs I can mix in my spliff Maybe If I'm elevated, just stay hood up and shaded Turn my phone off, get off the grid, and avoid messages Maybe all my problems just go away Maybe I wont wake up suicidal, maybe one day I know I'm fucking overworked and I know I'm underpayed I get about 12 to 15 calls every single day Sallie mae keeps calling me saying I owe $70k I wonder if they'll still collect it from my family See me and death have been close friends since I was only 13 And now I'm almost 25, but he still wont fucking leave What can I ever do to get his shadow off of from me I don't know why I wrote this shit, I know raps a dream And I dont need a chorus, man, fuck, I dont need to sing To get my point across, yo, look, it's me being me I can spit all day my lungs expanded from weed I can keep talking, mofuck I don't need to breathe I could kill a mother fucker and not even think twice guess what?, That's how you feel when you would take your own life So if you see me on the street, just get the fuck out my way I dont even want to conversate, just fuck out my face Because I've already accepted that is my destiny This song might seem sad, but to me it's freeing I've been in pain for so long death looks exciting Now the doctors just added me for 1 more disease I don't need any religion, man I just don't believe Say I'll go to hell, and I'll just that say you are decieved I just hope my death, unlike life, is just quick and achieved
lovin the audio posts and feedback.. looks like me bitching about this thread a few pages ago actually helped change something heres something i threw together real quick. got some people over and only had a minute to get something new recorded.. i'll give yall some feedback a little later too. Amp, very nice advice and respectable constructive criticisms. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2lxyfldfy4 this is my life and i love it, but if you under the impression that i'm never depressed then you doesnt understand what i covet, and neither do i i idolized Mike cause he made me believe i could fly twentysix and every passin year steepens the climb and every puff on this blunt just takes me deeper inside of myself until i see another side of myself, dog i aint preachin just high and i aint sleepin just tired, look in my eyes you see the demons behind em look in the mirror and see no soul, seekin the reason it died so i can then perform a ceremony to bring it to life and then nurture it and keep it alive naw i aint tweakin im fine.. i proudly carry these invisible scars, i speak two languages sometimes i turn these whips into cars, or turn these bitchez to broadz or turn these riches to stackz or turn theze brickz into padz where i can live like a mack its called ebonics Big L once taught a lesson in that a respectable man now but i like to bring the criminal back and thats how im gonna finish the track cuz im lazy by the way, if anybody has iphone headphones (with the built in mic) and garageband.. thats what i used to record this. so you can turn out some pretty decent quality if you play around with shit. lol