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Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Apex Word, Feb 18, 2010.

  1. #12381 NickaWittaBic, Oct 30, 2014
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    Every word of every verse that I've maliciously served.
    Militant with it so get your suit fitted for the hearse.
    Ya momma singin' hymns like they did back then in the church.
    Your dead in the dirt, ya flesh gettin' digested by worms.
    That's a nice way of expressin' what's next in the works.
    To put it lightly, I spread like the progression of germs.
    Expecting the worst, you're only just beginning to learn.
    Ushered in a new flame, so I'm lettin' it burn.

     
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  2. I rip into rappers with minimal effort,
    This shit is like checkers to Deep Blue's successor,
    You don't wanna see me lose my temper,
    A bomb you can't defuse start taking reclusive measures,
    Falling asleep through your lectures, not even Horton heard it,
    When I speak from the chest the concussive force'll murk em
    Not a normal person and I don't know what's more disturbing
    The minotaur that's forming or the swarm of gorgons in orbit,
    I spend a stack a month on that heady plant,
    Got me foaming at the mouth, any cash amount,
    Steady hands dissecting grams until my death I'm smacking loud
    Like an angry chick, tell me what's an angel to an atheist
    I coalesce with Roman legends just to choke the heavens,
    I'm dangerous, to the way you raise your kids
    Let em play with BICs and make em satanists,
    Crazy shit's a daily gig what could you say to him,
    Nathan, bitch
     
  3. #12383 stupidface, Oct 31, 2014
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    I got a couple.
    They say Im losing my mind, they say Im kinda insane
    They say I got a couple wires lose inside of my brain
    You could never understand so I dont try to explain
    I stay in my damn lane I just survive and maintain
    They wanna see in a coffin or inside of them chains
    they telling me to pick the pipe up put the pipe to his brain
    Im tellling them I thats me, and aint no side of me change
    They wanna see me leaking blood out while I lie on the grain
    But naw.. late bloomer, thats probably why I come alive in the rain
    I dont want be another young blood thats dyin in vain
    Only time Ill pull a trigger is my mom or little sister 
    and I put that on my soul that Ima ride and just bang
    My man just got 11 years for just a fight and some change
    no justice all they just wanna see him die in the tank
    Im on my Johnny Cash no I dont ride with a gang
    but Im wearing all black like Im about to slide in bank
     
    no mas no mas
     
  4. Fuck man, i cant think of anything
    my mind draws a blank, when i drink close to Hennessey
    hell, if im tense or anything
    my defense gets the best if im scheming on a recipe
    Dire aisles keep em leanin for a while screamin more than miles, piles steaming quite some time
    Leave em tied and dry fiending for there eyes seeing more than former beings of their lives
    Doors are broken open, ancient feelings have awoken, beasts and demons go for broke for these folk they take a toll on.
    hopless morons dont see right infront of them
    They claim these angels pray
    Lest they prey and are coveted
    Hovering above the dead shuddering muttering words you cant comprehend
     
  5. Good! its what they ordered, borderline cogs in a machine missing matching,
    Miss matched lashings given one at a time.
    Because, each click of the clock
    Each tickety tock, you keep giving it off
    For riveting stocks, listed for the price of life
    you strike a balance, how long until youve had it? Till your broke down and out, clinging to a habit.
    Their are no holes or gapes no narrow holes in fate, told you wait, as your soul escapes, you slowly dissipate.
    Whether your a cog or a gear, you will only be replaced, so long as your near those gentle golden gates, your fears dissappear and clears your mental state. As you steer and you veer, your soul will replicate.
     
  6. This is the first and only verse I have written and actually feel good about. (Though it's still too short) Hopefully this is me reaching a breaking point and there will be more to come.
     
    I was baptized in the first fallen snow
    I woke to trees dressed in white to match my new soul
    Though my heart remains volatile and dark like coal
     
    But one's subjective, product of the environment
    the other objective, eternal, so it doesn't matter, the ego is irrelevent
    And it's the god damned elephant in the room
    consumed by the fantasies of my doom
    and what follows it and my affair with the moon
     
    though my guess is good as yours
    All I can do is follow the course and divorce myself from fear
    and have faith my existence isn't limited by years.
     
  7. smokin way too much green..
    eyes bleeding staring at the screen,
    Tryna wash away the murder scene.
    And thats all cause im too baked lol
     
  8. #12388 Annicus, Nov 1, 2014
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    This was a freestyle I busted out in after reading a stupid article on fb about lgbt rights



    An eye for and eye, all faggots should die, it's written in your book, you must follow it blindly, the real message I think was mistook? For weak people getting raped kindly, for a god that is selfish and vain, leaving you feeling hellish and insane, the thing you don't get, you haven't given us equality yet? Let's recall shall we, what happened to that French King Louis, and his wife Marie Antoinette, they're heads became offset, staring up from the guillotine, blade falling, those masquerades they threw...darling, when you're a head shorter it's hard to be pristine, I hold the torch to your stake, any apologies you want to make? I am not the one that's forsaken, I'll never straighten, must be in cahoots with satan, it's time for you to awaken, this time we ain't fakin' we ain't stirred or shaken
    Tired of asking with our voices, asking with heavy closed hands, must be the the deviant lifestyle choices, dust to dust, bone to bone, shifting sands to shifting sands
     
  9. kinda reminds me of this shit lol 
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgk7MXWQOAM
     
  10. I could tell you were cool People Annicus but you kinda sucked in the beginning ;PP but you got good
     
  11. #12391 Jelicide, Nov 2, 2014
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    I was born sideways from a cancerous landscape,
    Encapsulating life while deforming them handshakes,
    Now listen that mans fake, his fictional plans break,
    I massacre at the saga and drop shit on his fans base.
    A clangs trait, a damp way,
    A tramps pain in damned rain,
    Supping down cans in unforgivable damn shame.
    Digital brands made the invisible hands fade,
    Additional, divisional, invincible mans.
    Swallow at the principles its clinical in mad fate,
    I wallow at the biblical allow what the bad say,
    Literal the quizzical in visions of rampage,
    Be lyrical its synicle, this pitiful damn plague.
    Despicable this arts my medicinal haze,
    Metaphysical, transitional rage.
    Political in criminal hate.
    Hitting mirracles in syllables the gruby unforgivable state!!!
     
    This is off my first EP... Bless
     
  12. Im also a beat producer, any one down for collabs get at me..
     
  13. #12393 NickaWittaBic, Nov 2, 2014
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    Go ahead and turn your back on the sun.
    I'm shinin' bright like the eye on the back of the one.
    I got ya eyes squinted,
    The reason why you'd rather ride tinted but ya 9 to 5 got you drivin' in a lemon what's up.
    Capitalism now you entered the rut.
    Even with a new job, you ain't gettin' enough.
    Stretching money and stressing over the littlest stuff
    And when ya funds sucked dry your on ya knees for the lunch.
    But me I never forfeit, while most of these drop to they knees in worship.
    Their focused on the beady eye of horus.
    But can't see that money is evil and all these coffins.
    I've even been the culprit putting my people second to golden crosses.
     
  14. Arisen has the decision to make an incision
    in divisions of societies born of false religion
    for the mission its required that there be no intermission
    intuition is the fuel that propels my inner vision
    to fruition in a world where no bodies listening.
     
    Somethings missing on this earth cause greed feeds politicians
                                          to false promises and lies no admission
    and plus they'll try to criticize my volition
    to launch the truth into the skies if you'll listen
    and trust you'll have to use your eyes for this vision
    cause crimes I'm listing, they'll deny in an instant
     
    now they outside, heats high in the kitchen
    while their people hungry to survive, no nutrition
    In time they'll have to come alive, no submission
    To the change the system that denies with persistence
    the shift in things that will provide what is different.
     
  15. Yea im THE M.C., come and kick it with me, smokin on some of this green, you know we'll never get clean, we get so blowed, on the dodo, hoping hoes show, on the low pro, then verses well be merkin be spitting shit thatll make feel worthless, but only if your one of the ones out there hurtin, all these nice peeps chillin smokin on da perfect.
    My influences? Mainly eminem and tech n9ne. And yes I call chronic dat perfect cause in my opinion it is perfect. Pm me if you live round portsmouth va and lookin for someone to freestyle with or.smoke with or both. Peace.
     
  16. I dont do the handouts the man fend for himself
    Never rocked dreds but lately its been dredin itself
     
  17. Thank you, well I've really only been writing verses since January and yea my beginning verses sucked lol, now I'm pretty fucking good.
     
  18. #12398 Annicus, Nov 3, 2014
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    An eye for and eye, all faggots should die, it's written in your book, you must follow it blindly, the real message I think was mistook? For weak people getting raped kindly, for a god that is selfish and vain, leaving you feeling hellish and insane, the thing you don't get, you haven't given us equality yet? Let's recall shall we, what happened to that French King Louis, and his wife Marie Antoinette, they're heads became offset, staring up from the guillotine, blade falling, those masquerades they threw darling, when you're a head shorter it's hard to be pristine, I hold the torch to your stake, any apologies you want to make? I am not the one that's forsaken, I'll never straighten, must be in cahoots with satan, it's time for you to awaken, this time we ain't fakin' we ain't stirred or shaken
    Tired of asking with our voices, asking with heavy closed hands, must be the the deviant lifestyle choices, dust to dust, bone to bone, shifting sands to shifting sands

    I'm the moral pollution, piss christians off more than evolution, back to my last verse, linguistic jabs and verbal outbursts, here's the super funny thing, if given the opportunity to show you the cruelty that was shown to me by followers of the divine three I'd leave the punishment up to the great banshee, to hate, to maim to kill that's disgusting, I believe your soul is suffering, into a demon you're turning, gates to the hate fire enterally burning, as much as I'd want to hold a magnum 500 to your temple as you cry and tremble, I couldn't and wouldn't that's not what I represent, from a young age I learned what hate meant, I'm holding the lighter to the line of stakes, but it won't spark, no fire in my lakes, I have no beast mark, so the next time you splash me with holy water, praying to your Heavenly Father, claiming to be a martyr, when instead you're the beast markers, selling souls in pews, not seeing all that you lose, it's s clever clever rouse, to let hate, distain and intolerance suffuse with outdated views, that I cannot excuse
     
  19. I know the instant I missed it, no lie, I lay depressed, feign
    indifference but remain impressed with the way she play so distant,
    The type you might just make your misses,
    Never invested cuz they spite to take your riches,
    But now I'm all a loan without the slightest stake of interest.
    Paying for it crying, saying it's wider lakes and fishes
     
  20. #12400 bubba ho-tep, Nov 3, 2014
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    Check my face and recognize this expression made, why shave?
    When Bitches telling me i look like Hemingway,
    So fuck a fade,
    All i need's this money to impress the babes,
    So quit the hating homie stuff a cone
    And get up out my face.
    Smoking everyday cause I chose too,
    This fruit loop!,
    got me talking to myself like i was on a Bluetooth,
    Who knew,
    I'd be blowing up don't call me bomb though,
    Pronto, now these bitches sucking on my swan nose,
    Feeling pressed for time, get mine like Optimus prime,
    I see why,
    all these midgets hating but they
    knee high,
    B.R.B. be right back wit the tree,
    Best weed, no seeds, like I'm eating tangerines,
    Capeesh? no peace, loud blunt full a kief
    No beat,
    I wrote this shit while walking home from the beach.
    That's me.
     

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