Post your verse!

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Apex Word, Feb 18, 2010.

  1. #21 Cynikal, Feb 20, 2010
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    cocaine is what makes it rain blood
    for many turn to fairies for there goods
    never wasn't from the burbs
    but sure got the bud

    just don't give a fuck
    because a bitch was on my nuts
    never even got to dunk
    smellin like skunk

    bringin' da funk to G.C.
    never mistake me for jeezy or wheezy
    lord knows my mind is gone
    never had to be stuck

    how many bitches you know that suck?
    tuck your piece under the seat
    because these hoes lookin' to creep
    better move your feet before you reap
     
  2. some shit i wrote a few nights ago when i was just feeling lowwww, kinda dark

    I'm feeling transparent for no apparent reason
    And I know on the inside, I'm internally bleeding
    Ain't no future I'm seeing, just the fall of an empire
    Latitude low, living life like a livewire
    Protons posthumous, inhaling phosphorous
    Caught up cat and mouse with conglomerates
    My outlook's obvious, pessimistic friction
    Call out for hope, I'll hop with quick contradiction
    And I'm no Nostradamus, but collision with comets
    Something I'm predicting, while spitting these sonnets
    I'll vomit vernacular, venom in my plasma
    Cell walls fall, the Great Wall of my cadaver
    Heard in the hereafter, will be hails of laughter
    Resurrected, infectious with an iodine splatter
    Mad hatter millennium, the empathic I'm ending em
    Seperating myself from space time continuum
    Earth's orbit is boring me, I'm done with diplomacy
    Calling all sinners, if beginners are stoning me
    I'll be unknowingly, uncloaking my purpose
    To welter to the rest with me: worn out and worthless
     

  3. your metaphors are magical
     
  4. you got talent homie. your style is completely different from mine.. like .. opposite ends of the rap-lyrical spectrum.. but i dig it for sure.

    sort of reminds me of an Immortal Tech style for sure.. with a major twist of your own.
     

  5. yeah man nice shit, good flow good metaphors. I would love to see what else you got :)
     
  6. When are we getting in round 2? :D
     
  7. #27 BenjaminStackin, Feb 21, 2010
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    I'm just sittin here, chillin, roamin grass city
    Dot com, gosh darn, wish I had that sticky
    With me... get a hickey, whenever I see Mary Jane
    Our lips touch and she take away every pain
    See I can't explain it, don't give a middle finger
    Whenever I'm with her... all I hear is singing angels
    All types of melodies, smoke weed, feel ecstacy
    Nothing else matters, (when) whenever she next to me
    So don't be testin me, fuck with her and rest in peace
    Give her all of my paper... any accessory
    Wrap her up in my love, light the fire to my heart
    Lost in the maze of life, I can find her in the dark
    Cus she shine like a compass, and I'm Christopher Columbus
    Whenever we're together, there's nothing that I can't encompass
    Nothing that I can't do, and you can trust me homie
    Long as I'm alive, she's gonna be my one and only

    Hope I get kushed tonight lmao
     
  8. I live my life full throttle and fuck playboy models,i smoke greens out a aquafina bottle
    I put it down for my town and rep wicked clowns ima s-c-r-u-b so dont fuck with me
    guns will bust and thats your last chance i pull my nine and say dance muthafucka dance
    im armed with an axe so ill kill ya and take ya money like a tax, buy some bud and get stoned to the max
     
  9. Lyrically I spit it quick, to make these rhymes sick and stick.
    Using my Jedi mind trick, to make you think need more,
    Making you scream out ENCORE!
    S-foil attack Red Four,
    Its time to hit it, and quit it,
    Then spit it a little more,
    Before the Empire gets back and throws us to the Rancor.

    You want to turn a blind eye,
    But soon it'll be a Death Star fly drive by,
    They want to brainwash you, making you say,
    Enjoy your stay, don't forget to obey, the Empire every day,
    They can't see us Rebels creeping up,
    They keep misreading, the friction, power addiction,
    This ain't science fiction, its space fantasy,
    So open your eyes, mesmerized by this skill,
    They call me a Jedi master, using my tongue reflexes faster,
    Words like light-sabers, cutting through the blasters,
    Get up, and be prepared to be inspected by your Drill Master.
     
  10. thanks man +rep. that's why i love hip-hop music and it's diversity so much though. everyone's got a unique style that sets them apart. I always check the battle rep thread when you drop something, always top notch. I actually have an ep coming out soon with a few other people. I'll post the link when it's finished, mostly just political rap and a few battles thrown in there for the hell of it, gonna be free to download cause i don't care too much for any money, but anyways shit i'm drunk for the first time in a while. We need to get a Best of Grasscitcy Collab mixtape going on soon though. There's a lot of good rappers on here
     
  11. I thought you and me had a round 2 and you beat me (you son of a bitch ha) but nobody else went up against their competition. Guess we scared em away. I'm down for the round 3 finales soon.
     
  12. Sitting up in this night just smoking my bud,
    Slurring my Ws like I'm Elmer Fudd,
    Using this hallucinogenic drug to see the Bugs,
    Getting surrendered by these nugs,
    Feeling swept under the rug, giving up control,
    Losing ratings in this opinion poll, wishing I could smoke harder,
    Running out of my chronic, flowing like this is audiotronic,
    exploding this thread like its nucleonic,
    Lets see where it goes, throwing up to the rest of the hoes,
    with the flows to expose, the woes of the HMOS.
     
  13. I been smoking weeed all day, everyday
    I can roll you a joint in multiple different ways
    gimme a bag of 10 trees that contains no seeds
    if you dont know how much I smoke go ask jeeves
    Ive got green leaves covering my mean schemes
    and I got peace trees that make life a fantasy
    Ive got many cds I can sell to teen geeks
    my life is peachy Fuck yeah Seaking!
    Catch me stuntin, blunt cruisin, always up to something
    always up to nothing now Im suddenly Bumping
    pack tha bowl up to the mother fucking brim
    smoke that in two seconds then fill it up again
    to not fill it up is a mother fucking sin
    smoke an 1/8th in the evening with my best friends
    I like to creep on facebook when Im trippin
    and I like when THEM BITCHES GET TO TIPPIN-TIPPIN-TIPPIN ON MY DICK! TIP TIPPIN ON MY DICK
     
  14. i don t produce average rhymes but savage lines
    like from magic times you could call me a wizard
    i am eating you fucking flies like a hip-hop lizard
    couldn't touch my gizzard even if you had a knife
    because im a Cherokee i probably live more life's
    like a hawk to some mice you decrease my appetite
    ill never lack the fight, or the might, or the fuckin will
    always know its fight or flight so you might get killed
    they do it for they thrill ill probably do it for the meal
    because you know im ill like a brain tumor with skills
    i have power the heals with the white powder no deal
    and keep it on the real is your ballin show somebody
    whatever you want for real i probably know sombody

    HCL are you gonna drop some fire or what?
     
  15. My friends, lets begin with the end of the show,
    its my entrance, this sentence has nowhere to go,
    like a menace i replenish and remember my flow,
    like a member of congress, i pretend to be slow,
    id never surrender my dough to a venomous foe,
    a snake with the grass, catch me blowing the dro,
    im probably cloning a hoe, a mad scientist knows,
    that the knowledge you hold is worth mo than gold,
    forget whatever your told, listen only to your heart,
    and in this cold ass world, its that plus your smarts,
    this is not where it starts but where my verse ends,
    murdered person in a hearse being followed by friends
     
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  16. Ok Z, you wanna start spitting some fire like that? You know I gotta drop something now!

    I just took a hit, time to make everyone quit
    Cause I'm stompin on their shit with my lyrical fit
    Listen while I transmit my thoughts into verbal
    Smokin up these dope emcees like they were Cali herbal
    Or maybe they're my gerbils and I'm the scientist
    You got 1000 ways to die, just check my appliance list
    I'm high as shit, ruling planets with an iron fist
    Verses so sick, even deaf people cosign with this
    Why is this? That's what these other rappers askin'
    Ask ya mom, cause I really wanted to shoot you in the napkin
    The only thing I ask is why these other dudes are rappin
    Cause when they come to battle they know what's about to happen
    You hear the clappin, but I don't have any heat
    That's the audience applaudin when I'm spittin over beats
    But still got people tryin to stalk me with my tweets
    So I put them in the ground like they were AP's cleats
    I'm a savage, I'm a beast, I eat up anything with meat
    Eating and shitting emcees is my daily repeat
    Now I'm gettin tired, so I'm about to end it
    Another ill verse in the books like I intended
     
  17. #38 Cubic Cuban, Mar 3, 2010
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    This is my first verse I've ever written. LEt me know what you guys think of it, i'd really appreciate your feedback. I wrote it whilst listening to 'Arrow Root' by DOOM:

    These words I cannot control,
    Leaping from my jaw to unbalanced pedistool
    Center of 'cool', in the fabricated laws
    I was humanity's first designer flaw
    Casuality of ignorance in the eyes of society
    So if I free my mind, you're not gonna hire me?
    I'm trying to find peace in this inflamed setting,
    A stab in the back and the lost ring at your wedding
    Trapped in thoughts, I refuse to escape
    Death is just an illusion that determines your fate
    Jump out of reality and swim to the shore
    Not that you're free, it's time to explore
     
  18. ok i got an idea... how about this isnt a battle thread but more of a personal competition. if you think someones verse is ill then write one you think is more fire.
     
  19. Rap phenomenon, here to take back my glory
    Slaughterin the competition, leave the crime scene gory
    Daily shit, my life story, never boring
    Take LSD, DMT and shrooms to start exploring
    The depths inside my mind, cause my thoughts keep soaring
    A "tell-tale heart", put rappers under the flooring
    Contorting, words to fit my rhyme scheme
    A constant sick flow with impeccable timing
     

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