Rap battle anyone?

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by TokingToker, Oct 12, 2007.

  1. I weave soliloquies, through puppet strings
    Ventriloquies, control the fate, bench the

    World from shoulder blades. Up and down, pumpin loud, snorts you hear, when I grunt

    You hear the sounds of roaring bears. Hairs on end, stand against In fear of what's to

    Happen when, hunters strike again. The bullets fly, the birds don't fly in metal

    Skies, the screeching sound from metal lies, inside the minds of prey I like, so pray they

    Might. The lords in sight, but only if they prayed to tonight. It's worth the fight

    You only get one shot at life, so aim it right, cuz if you miss, you won't get that Chance

    again. Young handsome devil, milling metal, burning hell up like a kettle, ain't no l tea

    inside to Swallow. Man it's special, when the sorrows in that bottle, and you drown

    Inside today, what's goin bury you Tomorrow. I can feel it, I can feel it

    I can feel the time I borrowed, I can see it, I can see it, I can see the sky is falling,

    So now the birds are crawling, and it's crazy how it changed, I guess to grow up, you

    Can never stay the same
     
  2. I'm keep it honest-I been the shit like I'm switchin pants,
    and every time I ryme gotta clench then switch my stance,
    Im as nasty as they come-you gotta really be kiddin man,
    ta even stand a chance-first-try gettin different hands,
    then a mind to controllem-bigger arms just ta hold'em,
    matter of fact a new brain and have it come with different plans,
    Im the sickest-like a fiend nigga-twichin-bout to getta gram,
    let me paint a better picture-for those who dont get it- damn,
    Im truly the type of nigga who a take a whole christian fam,
    Poor gas on they ass-light a match-and then flick a hand,
    Is the picture gettin Vivid man-Im really the last reeper,
    have you scared ta log in-just relax-try ether lol,
    Reach through ya IP and blast my heater,
    found dead nigga shot through his laptop speakers,
    And I have my creatures-they come when its dark time,
    all black-cant see'em-and they coming with them Carbines,
    if its any type of beef - its yellow tape around ya car time,
    thats the wolfpack homies-should call they ass the shark line,
    See im really in this lifestyle-cant do this shit part time,
    you the type ta snitch if the feds offer hardtime,
    Yall think this rap shit just for fun-this is yard time,
    faggot ass nigga-looking around for a guard line,












     
  3. Me i really guard mine thats why ya'll scared of me,
    But its me who on point-watch these bitch niggas starefully,
    never catch me slippin-shidddd-only a few aware of me,
    keep a glock 40 tucked even while im at thearopy,
    how I feel right now-Welllllllll doc-Appearently,
    I choked a couple rappers from a forum that tried airin me,
    I got they IP addresses then a software comparency,
    google map the coordinants-gps said Ill be there at 3,
    then I packed a few things and headed out treadin carefully,




    I dont know the rest yet lol cant tell the future
     
  4. Battle me?
    ill summon the darkest forces
    you have ever seen
    remember reepa
    this is me deep in the flesh with recipes
    so nod your head defending
    god will get your conscious cleanly swept,
    I mean infront this audience
    ill body this embodiment,
    with embalming fluids
    ill use it to prove that im better than you
    im a druid with words
    you're a student who couldn't break through
    pens are not your fortay
    depending on bending more ways
    im spitting these prison cells (bars)
    you're pending penitentiary foreplay,
    my pens intent was to make you sorry
    vent and set the bar straight you're garbage, you're boring flow is uncomparable to mine and you know it.
     
  5. Candy ass rappers. smh
     
  6. #27906 GothamDiesel, Oct 12, 2015
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    Honestly I really dont rap or write that often but fuck it...


    Fuck your summoning, I got forces of nature
    Captain planet put to labor
    Got enforcers of glaciers, I got fire to make you vapor
    And some water to be your savior ( I left earth out because you're already dirty as shit)
    You got them severe words and fantasy bars

    I got them atmospheres and plant with me bars
    Talking about flows when no ones actually flowing in

    I got bodies of water you'd just dip your toes in
    You could say I aint shit, be sad it aint adequate, but really saying I aint atta quit

    Really dont battle cuz Im self absorbed never thought the pen as a sword
    I got a conscious to contest and it's getting my best
    Like my greatest hits was just list of flaws

    The latest whips and homage to my voyage

    Au reviour when this pond thaw, til then I write with a demons claw

     
  7. Dream on, can't touch the team, got the game on lock like a referee

    Only gang that I be wit, is refuges, can't cook even

    If you got the recipe. Blood in me is a different breed

    The 7 wonder, the missing link mystery. Who claps thunder

    Tear the game into smithereens, throw it in the Chesapeake.

    Better watch the hand dog, Hand off, Randolph, saw off, smoke you like a

    Gandolph, damn boss, stop that, tell dem boys run that, or fall flat

    Holla at me, Im the man who make the dollars stack up.

    You Betta call for back up

    for I blow the spot up

    Noodles in hot water,

    That's why you always softer
     
  8. IM A TOKER---AND ITS NOT THE WEED IM TALKIN BOUT,
    CAUSE I TOKE WIT THE RATCHETS WHILE THESE FAGGOT NIGGAS TALK IT OUT,
    40CAL MAKE IT OKWARD-TRY TALKIN WHILE YOU ON THE COUCH,
    ROPED LIKE A BOVINE WITH DUCKTAPE ALONG YA MOUTH,
    jUST CAUSE YOU RYME DONT MEAN YOU A RAPPER,
    DR SUESE IS A RYMER AND HIS BOOKS NEVER HAVE CHAPTERS,
    KIDNAPP YA DAUGHTER AND THEN ONLY FEED HER CRACKERS,
    NO WATER-NO DRINK-NO DR PEPPER AFTER,
    THEN MAKE A PHONE CALL TO TELL YOU THAT I HAVE HER,
    AND THE CALL BEING TRACED BUT ITS A 60 SECOND TRACKER,
    "DADDY I'M SCARED"-CAUSE THE MAN GOT ME CAPTURED,
    SAID HE GONNA CUT ME INTO TINY LITTLE FRACTURES,
    TAKE BACK THE PHONE AND YOU ASKIN WHAT I WANT,
    I TELL YOU I NEED A SACRIFICE AND SHE IS PERFECT FOR THE MASTER,
    iF YOU REALLY WANT THE BASTARD-THEN IMA NEED A BLUNT,
    A FOOTLONG FROM SUBWAYS AND A LARGE SODA LUNCH,
    ---SEE WHAT I MEAN WHEN I SAID YOUR A "RYMER",
    MY BARS HAVE DEPTH AND YOURS SIT IN A BINDER,
    YOU ARE WHAT WE CALL "FAKE"-LIL NIGGA YOU A KNOCK OFF,
    AND JUST A REMINDER-IM GENUINE IN EVERY WAY,
    YA BABYMOMS YELLIN "GOD" AND THE BITCH REALLY NEVER PRAY,
    YOU "HOOD" ON THE NET-BUT IM "HOOD" NIGGA EVERYDAY,
    YOU PERCIEVED TO BE REAL BUT THE REAL SEE YOU SECOND RATE,






     
  9. I'm a psychopath with words they're alleged weapons
    sever every sentence clever reverend exorcism hexes put me on my death bed but im alright my head wasn't screwed on tight
    and as night grew longer I grew stronger up in this bar fight,
    all right lets get it going who wants to martyr flow wetter than water hotter than fire reconcile or lead to slaughter
    while this single file line widdles down another mile, grin and a smile holding this crown down, resistance is futile.
     
  10. #27910 Cawdswallup, Oct 13, 2015
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    My syllables shatter realms
    I'm at a biblical pinnacle, spout'n pivotal principles.
    Y'all are visibly pitiful.
    I'm a visible miracle, Incredibly lyrical.
    This individual, unpredictably satirical.
    Not your typical criminal, scatter images of minerals, like bullet casings, the individual original.
    A critic of the critical,
    Astounding outstanding asshats with my mystical ritual.
    Y'all are too new to this, despicable.
    I'm a clinical cynical
    A literal formidable.
    The intellectual with an artificial lung.
    Habitually addicted to the sex, officially hung
    Like an animal,
    Your prehistoric rhetoric, fucking dung.
    Raise your bars, you're fucking dumb
    Raise my arms, cause i'm fucking done.
     
  11. #27911 Cawdswallup, Oct 13, 2015
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  12. We need to get a small rap battle tournament
    all we really need is 8 people??


    1 vs 8
    2 vs 7
    3 vs 6
    4 vs 5


    2 rounds each, 16 bars each. we be the judges.
     
  13. How do we judge the battle fairly without biased opinions? The peoplw judging would have to be knowledgeable about lyricism and not just punchlines.
     
  14. Could definitely be a lot of fun! maybe even do a 2v2.
     
  15. Nobody could keep track of that when everyone has the freedom to post a will.
     
  16. True, we could make a temporary post to do it on specifically.
    these botanical thoughts from pot smoke, eloped to cannabis tokes and dope flows,
    mechanical blows of trichomes
    deep inside of my mind when im stoned!
    so take a hit, eyes dilate like an aids patient with an angry grin two steaks and an eighth of gin, barbecue sauce on the plate that we placed you in.
    Im inhumane kid, deranged crazy, im out of my mind you lazy babies, been slashed with a razorblade lately?
    im filling the gaps like a mall crawling with ladies.
     
  17. #27917 Acidphere, Oct 14, 2015
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    It will be based off of


    Creativity (clever rhyme schemes)
    Punchlines
    Word play
    Multiples
    Personals/Delivery


    unless you guys can think of anything else.
    We would make a separate thread.
    Flip a coin on who goes first and against who.
    No biased opions becaus you'll have to explain why you chose who you did.
     
  18. That would work.

    We should also have a specific time the verse is due.
    Give them a couple of days to write it. Maybe like 3 days and the time to submit would be at 11:59 pm the date of.
     
  19. now this should be interesting....im with it lol


     
  20. we can have 5 people judge....so even if its bias based its still completely irrelevant and still can be outvoted
     

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