Rap battle anyone?

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by TokingToker, Oct 12, 2007.

  1. Help me help you
    Let show you around soon,
    This my sound dude so sit down and bow to a power vessel, wrestle with a sour pencil an sentence stencils, add lines of rhyme until the time it hits harder, these next bars are marauders marching louder and farther,
    Than anything you could ever accomplish. its honestly modest my honestys caustic conscience is constantly clocked collectively rocking your shits been falling off with every second your beat....
    Like whoah where did it go?
    Thats what I think with everything that you wrote. You had me like "oh, you're a kingpin?" You gotta be kidding me thinking you're winning, do I have to illustrate a picture with me and you in it to see it from a different view point to prove that im better than anything that you do boy?
    Its a moot point.
     
  2. @Apocalibz I'll reply in a bit, laptop not working and phone keeps fucking up :/
     
  3. Okay..
    They say my bars are sweet, call me Mr. Goodbar
    I started being positive the second that i took charge,
    You biting content, i want my lineback like Wesley Woodyard
    I'm book smart, hood smart, great job hell its a good start,
    Not trying to look hard, come out Clean cut - Trying to look sharp
    But they still trying to blast when i come round' like a Nuva ring,
    Pop up get wet..now you going back down like you Scuba Steve,
    A shooter do as a shooter please, and you only shooting the breeze,


    Do Re Me,I pull the rotator- don't play me, If i'm dying Don't save me,

    Run it all the way you got no safety,honestly you won't make it home safely
    Guns blazing not grazing eyes hazy top Asian amazing grace i'm spacin'
    rhymes in bad placement, i'm high on a spaceship take rips of great ape spliffs
    these acres are sacred im blazed as Jamaicans awaken makin' eggs n bacon
    with satan just embrace it. no end to my zone no fading im just saying'
    im bobby flay mixed with ghandi and Alexander the greatest,
    Even serving the dead but i aint Charon shit, River of styx
    i enter the crypt and deliver my spit with the grave diggers kids
    as wicked as wicked can get.






     
  4. I am vengeance, im a cynic with a clenched fist,
    and whoever comes in its a splinter in my middle finger its pinnacle,
    Clinically illriginal mimic of a syndicate
    Im a synonymous individual.
    Lets be honest ya you saw it in your visual
    Open up your iris so you see as high as eye
    then you'll see a flash to the skillet from the fucking frying pan,
    Im not lying man, im saying that im hot...
    The Hotter the better the wetter the water other men oughtta have studied nirvana
    Cause ive read upon it im modest but honestly ready to start shit im higher than god, who's side are you on?
    I be the king and you others were wrong,
    Just a mirage in you're memory
    How many heveanly hyms for delivery
    Somebody send me some weaponry
    Quick get me recipes and dummies to test them with R.I.P spelling on all of you're next of kin.
     
  5. I really liked this verse, i see you getting better with every verse man.


    "I'm modest but honestly ready to start shit, i'm higher than god who's side are you on?"
    fire.
     
  6. Thanks for the feedback Acid, it really means a lot!
    I see you're improving too, keep at it!!
     
  7. #27828 Acidphere, Aug 5, 2015
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    I'll feed you a Viagra before i kill you, so you can get your wish and die hard.
    My rhymes are out of this earth, like my god.
    Yeah thats my opening line nothings gettin' sweeter,
    Everyone dies eventually and shakes hand with the grim reaper,
    I'll make you pay attention now this time its a bit cheaper,
    I've been deeper a sick feature who spaz like meth tweakers,
    I squeeze that llama, Peta all over my ass again
    tagging dead animals in my Instagram..
    Act up get instaslammed brain looking like a can of spam
    Grandma prostitute, instagram,Hell i got da cash in hand,
    Rapaholic i stand by these bars for days,
    No wait, Alcoholic i stand by these bars for days,
    Last time in Vegas i stayed at the bars, four days,
    On the fourth day god created the sun some say
    so now it makes sense during rap battles i vote for Day (Daylyt)
    If you cross me i'm a black cat you better hope n pray.


    Punchlines at your front door, open this can of worms if ya want more
    Cause i got more in store like the super walmart floor.
     
  8. I own this entire thread in the web im high up within it, im a weaver of words imma believer what im seeing will neither occur, nor will it be hypocritical of me to concurr
    And get my pens pads papers and pencils
    Ready and weapon stencils vary in various pantameter variations its clever they carried hatred on tempos of every nation and serenades in your brainstem until your thoughts get marinated
    And your barely able to communicate
    Ive hijacked your mind in a higher mental state and if I defy the fate of the finish line you'll be second place.
     
  9. I know its looking like i might seem stressed
    I'm up this thread like a seamstress
    Gonna measure up that body when my team hit,
    We ripped off tree sticks and you looking like deep six,
    Surrender before i come with the cheaptricks
    Thats some real eightys shit,
    ima do you like shady did any crazy kid,
    bitch i will put you in a babies crib
    Yo i heard you give amazin' head..(pm me if you do seriously)
    okay where was i...man im feeling dazed again,
    Sam i Am everything green like my eggs n ham,
    Went to a paraplegic convention and told them to take a stand
    I feel like Bill Cosby, Get pussy than get bars, im very off pudding, (putting)
    I'll drop his act quicker than tight rope walkers with lost footing.






     
  10. (Ahaaa! I been gone for a while now.... lyrics in my head forming to a pile now...
    Words building up in my head can break glass, sick lyrics, it's a vile sound...
    Toxic waste samples were in that vile, now,
    Glass's shattered, anti-matter, levitate and spit bile, wow!)



    RAA! I bet you missed the indecipherable GOD's serenade,
    Fruits of my labour, mind so sharp it's like a needle dipped in lemonade,
    You mighta forgot my prowess so I demonstrate,
    Draw my arm back an throw grenades,
    Lyrics blow up in your face,
    Grace of God I kill em all in a couple ways,
    You be lucky if you survive a couple days,
    I find your house, no time to open wide your mouth to scream before the bullets spray,
    Ah! That shit cray, best believe,
    Pray to God if I let you leave,
    N you best not cross my path again or I'll track you down and kill with ease,
    One to the back of the head as you're on your knees,
    I'm laughing loud, you're screaming "Please!",
    But I just ignore you,
    As your wife implores, you,
    Watch as she gets on her knees and I skeet on her face and you know that your wife is a whore, dude,
    But I'm done now so I kill her, then I stab you in your liver,
    Cause you both so basic, lookin for a bitch who would bite on the dick if you tried that shit, man your girl's so vanilla,
    And I'm going off topic, but shit I aint gunna drop it,
    I kill you, kill her, kill em, all of em, fuck you up, fuck the beat, now I drop it!
     
  11. Im back on attack-yall remember me dontchu,
    If not MR Reepa nice ta meet ya-but to my enemies Goku,
    I see alot of talk since typing concidered as vocals,
    so if i break a niggas hands Its concidered i choked'em,
    Everybody super tough but when real niggas approach'em,
    and ask to cash in all them wolf tickets ya sold'em,
    most show that they bitch and somehow sit with a scrotum,
    Any nigga feel diffrent-tell that nigga i owe'em,
    Heres a puposal-
    pussy niggas get a new hobby,
    Cause some of the shit written-niggas listen-it's sloppy,
    My 2year old a go cop ya mix shit probly,
    Half an hour later find your tracks in his potty,
    Log the fuck fuck off-no pasting-no copy,
    go grab a notebook from the corner store poppy,
    come back-
    smoke a blunt-get your brain workin properly,
    toss ideas back and forth like your playing "poor" hockey,








     
  12. I spit harder then the masses it aint about who the fastest,
    I spit thick shit get a bowl of mollasses,
    mix for 10 minutes then start to add a couple glasses,
    Of waking up hating everybody with a passion,
    Mix in a large dose of pride and a couple kiss my asses,
    two tablespoons of bullshit that happen to end traggic,
    Throw it in the oven and let it broil till it ashes,
    That my muthafukkan life who ever said cookin classes,
    You can say that you real but you can feel me in my typin,
    Send chills down ya spine every verse concidered lightnin,
    no thinkin just typing while the rest sit in silence,
    Reepa im a tyrant so i love to see your highness,
    Especially when Im I high I can be sooooo violent,
    Leave piece of these rappers My body count-mindless,
    Jakes cant ID you unless they do it by ya eyelids,




     
  13. #27834 reepa1984, Aug 13, 2015
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    reepa not a screenname nigga thats "usually",
    If you think that im lying-mutha fukka-really[​IMG]-google me!!,
    You can see all the mugshots-what the state was "accusing" me,
    I told the judge she was cute and that the system was abusing me,
    Next thing you know My ass home typing truthfully,
    Im a calculated nigga and i bet if it was two of me,
    give'em a call like "what you doin-
    his ass a say"doin me",
    Only real reconize me-in the hood where ya find me thats why these pussies not use to me,
    Im a rare type of wolf-Im always on the hunt-some shit aint at a zoo to see,


    ,


     
  14. Naw flaws no gimmicks-in my draws-off briches,
    I can declare marshal law and take over all ya buisness,
    Why stall with the limited hogwash spittin,
    If i raise a hand I'll graze a man so amagine if its all fisted,
    "As Gwad is my witness" I will not fall kickin,
    If i fall still control moving like when if a dog shitted,
    Avoidence is the key if im envolved call piglets,
    To evolved be at all standin tall with tall midgets,
    If everybody has a flaw then yall are all bitches,
    I guess my one little flaw was I listened to yall dissin,
    I read 3 pages of nothing at all convencin,
    Its was like I was reading psalms-----how many of yall christian?,






     
  15. #27836 reepa1984, Aug 13, 2015
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    Im destined for greatness-appreciate how i gave this,
    room some disapline-my whole flow meditation,
    till I overdose on medications till I float-seperation,
    of my soul resperation starts to slow and hestation,
    And I awake to place where no hope and desperation,
    Can ever save my soul-so I go sit next ta satan,
    Whisper in his ear like "Yo Bro" we next ta make it,
    NOw where all the hoes-have'em dancin so close next to naked,lmao




     
  16. #27837 Cawdswallup, Aug 14, 2015
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 14, 2015
    Plagiarize your bars like I made'em
    Applause or scars is yur ultimatum
    I'm in my optimum prime,
    you're all spark but no flame
    It's cod's wallop time.
     
  17. Yo I dare someone to reply this verse, but don't just rhyme some words,
    actually try to work, cook something dope even if it blew/blue like heisenberg,
    but nothing matters when you sleep in your mom's basement, on an inflated mattress,
    and the bitch who you spend all day with, look's like a praying mantis,
    that complains and rants to stop your life & change your habits,
    you get in an argument, but you ain't hard as shit,
    so you apologize and make'er a sandwich,
     
  18. Yo its acidsphere and god almighty but I ain't got all night to writey write this satirical
    Piece on why they alright with a pen, when im igniting this match im striking in decisively fast a mastermind with his rhymes and everytime it depends on, who enters the ring cut, set; its a cinema scene simple as dream assisted benedryl temples and limousines, your offended by simple syllables im selling my soul for cinnamon rolls an sentimentaly sending a message ment to be mentally resurrected through centuries, you aint offending me.
     
  19. Ive strung together sentences these words retain a weapon edge to sever heads, appendages, and whoever gets offended by it, no worse no riots just a high kid with his eye slits redder than a firehydrant I think im running out of mileage, cause there aint no mountain too high that I cant climb get to to the top just to jump off and hit new heights and thats my past time, but I cant remember the last time I ever called it quits said fuck this shit I quit rapping and ran up from the bottom quick, never no twisted ankles always just stubbed toes from opponents stepping on em raising my head showing my snub nose. And im stressing every second that I think about my future problems, never mind, fuck it, im going kamasutra on em.
     

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