Generic? That's real rap. Your rap is on some Mac Miller shit you're just talking about surface chatter that doesn't matter.
No, I focus on internal rhymes, syllables, stressed and unstressed consonants, and vowel play. You struggle to find out how you can make the ends rhyme.
Let me guess, you just wanna confess, about how you and your homies get down in a dress? take a swing around his hole, hes just a stumbling mess, that seems to impress you and make my stomach upset. he says; take a hit of this blunt B and show me some raps, but you end up just wrestling and kissing his kneck, showing him no disrespect because under your breath, you said "yo homie I luh you", but meant no homo instead? K dog your a gangster Keep it G ill see you later, Keep that G string this weekend, cause your T-dogs new flavour.
I would confess some shit, but the nsa be watching us I love to hear you flex, but if you really with it bust at us I been down with them homies pushing weights thats more than you Roll up on your block and mash up on your whole crew I aint no fuck boy, I'm a d boy, bitch I'm a g boy Ain't no doubt where I been at, I been on the block while it's hot boy While you in suburbia talking shit you see on tv Since a young lil nigglet, packin semis in a LV 10 years old dumped a fat clip in a fat cat dome, then I took the throne, Fuck your whole family I will break a niggas bones I'll collect the debts, I got stacks on deck Anytime you see a nigga, bet I'm throwing up my set That's piru, screaming fuck blue i dont even neee a reason to drop you Clinically insane, not right in the brain I get enjoyment out of causing you pain Fuck what they sayin, I'm king on the block Anybody wanna try me, bitch I already took shots You call this generic hip hop, I call it stories from my hood Ain't no God there, no love for us, there aint nothing good Just them bangers, bangin leave you brainless Opps catch you lackin an they hit you with that stainless So what are words to bullets? What are rhymes to tools bitch? LaFamilia, I'm the head of the family Soldiers in my sets, in my cliques but they all rep me
Fuck change your style up or something. there's a difference between what you and I could get done, I would lyrically destroy you, without a knife or a gun. when the mic goes off in me, its just an army of one, see, I dont need a weapon to psychologically harm anyone. take a sit and just stay seated, I think im underestimated, you sound the same way to me must be under educated, something tells me that we, aren't in the same lane go grab some books and study, cause the rap game, just isn't your thang.
Lol that ain't even rap bruh. You're just rhyming sentences. There's a culture and history behind hip hop/rap it's not just rhyming sentences together. If you wanna post verses back and forth do it in the "post your verse". If you wanna "rap battle" then try again my nigga.
holy fuck your daft. Difference is your shit doesn't rhyme. I dont need to talk about guns and drugs for it to be considered rap you illiterate degenerate.
Yeah you do. If you don't then it's not rap. It's pop or something. Like bruno mars or lupe fiasco or "radio friendly" music. Keep shit real fuck all that mainstream bullshit. Rap is about a culture. If it's not about the culture then it ain't real, it's pop. You're justin bieber my nigga.
so every rapper that doesn't mention guns or the word nigga isn't a rapper? You're a moron. Hit me up when you learn to rap.
Yeah. If they don't mention guns or drugs or other things that influence the culture then it's not rap. It's pop, like I just said.
Actually hip hop is the cultures background. Rap is rhyming or grouping words together in a rythm. But ya, proves that you dont know shit all about the topic. you cant rap, hell you can barely rhyme words together. usually its just the same words over and over.
Ok then by that logic rappers don't make "rap", they make hip hop, and you just said that's the culture. So again, if the hip hop culture is missing then it's not right. It's called approximate rhymes by the way, most rappers do it. Nas=rapper (rhyming groups to a rhythm) Johnny Cash= Country (rhyming groups to a rhythm) Every type of music is rhyming words together and adding a rhythm. it is was it is rap is rap. And that was not rap.
then how come you cant rap? rather than taking the shaft and saying I cant, how about you come back with something instead of acting like a little girl about it? maybe switch your style up and be somewhat original. you sound the same as any flavor of the week rapper (chief keif) etc. I want to see some multi syllabic rhymes and different rhyme schemes. I believe in you home girl.
I'm sitting on the train tracks, with a backpack strapped, to my back, but no looking back If I stay in chi, then I'm finna get clapped No father's there to raise us, an mommas hooked on crack I think I got PTSD, people droppin fast I'm sitting on these tracks, thinkin bout the macs All the niggas I looked up to caught lead in the back Or back in the pen, so I wonder how it will end Will I be in a casket next, or will it be my friend The community is toxic, boxed in, pushed out, away from the white crowd Took down our houses and built us public housing Try to live an honest life you won't even make a thousand That's waking up to bills late, need paid, dealing with grown problems like my hair gray That's all week, day after day, so what I say is my way Of dealing with the pain and the insane ways, that's in my brain Like baby momma drama, ain't no peace, no dolli lamma I can't get to sleep at night my mind is racing, and in my dreams I'm bein chased an I don't look back, at my past, I'm passed it, now pass that So I can free my mind from myself now where's the dope at? Tried to do it your way. Your way is just focusing on grammar when I'm focusing on how I spit it when I'm just kickin it with my homies and off the top of my head.
Sounds a hell of a lot cleaner though, keep at it this way and you'll be better in no time! Ill hit you back up with a verse later, may not be a battle verse so no hate.